Love the Great Hunter
A love poem27 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Love the Great Hunter", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet, has with craft and skill, told it as it is.
To me this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Love the Great Hunter", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet, has with craft and skill, told it as it is.
To me this is a six, but unfortunately I've run out of them. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2020
Comment from Lori Thompson
Sweet. I like the way you rhymed the poem. The story was well told with a tongue in cheek of love is both bad and good. I especially like the line "Love hunts in the sun, and seduces at night." The ending is especially good with acknowledging you have been captured.
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Sweet. I like the way you rhymed the poem. The story was well told with a tongue in cheek of love is both bad and good. I especially like the line "Love hunts in the sun, and seduces at night." The ending is especially good with acknowledging you have been captured.
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from Ezer
Are we the predator or the prey? A fun poem that fancies some reflection on if we are lucky or cursed to be in love. Great rhyme and rhythm. Some words could be omitted to keep it sharp and succinct, such as 'because'.
Very much enjoyed reading and asking myself, "Have I too been caught?"
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Are we the predator or the prey? A fun poem that fancies some reflection on if we are lucky or cursed to be in love. Great rhyme and rhythm. Some words could be omitted to keep it sharp and succinct, such as 'because'.
Very much enjoyed reading and asking myself, "Have I too been caught?"
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from equestrik
This is really clever, especially at the end! :) I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem as well as the content. It is a good write for the love poem contest. Best of luck.
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This is really clever, especially at the end! :) I enjoyed the rhythm of this poem as well as the content. It is a good write for the love poem contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the warning. It tells the reader to enjoy the wonders of love but beware there is another side, a darker side, that is not always spoke up. Everthing has good and bad.
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I love the warning. It tells the reader to enjoy the wonders of love but beware there is another side, a darker side, that is not always spoke up. Everthing has good and bad.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from wishawave
This is a lovely, well-written poem. I feel connected. I like the metaphor of 'nymph', the unpredictable and colourful sides of love. I really enjoy reading it.
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This is a lovely, well-written poem. I feel connected. I like the metaphor of 'nymph', the unpredictable and colourful sides of love. I really enjoy reading it.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
Comment from Ben B.
A bittersweet yet accurate representation on reckless love. Love isn't necessarily devastating, then again neither is fire if you use it properly. I can see how those who have had a bad experience would feel this way.
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A bittersweet yet accurate representation on reckless love. Love isn't necessarily devastating, then again neither is fire if you use it properly. I can see how those who have had a bad experience would feel this way.
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Comment Written 28-Sep-2020