Rebellious September
Amphibrach meter ~ Rhyming poem29 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your description of the progression of the seasons, especially from September to fall. Your amphibrach meter, rhymes and use of personification are very effective. Best wishes in the Rhyming Poem contest- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed your description of the progression of the seasons, especially from September to fall. Your amphibrach meter, rhymes and use of personification are very effective. Best wishes in the Rhyming Poem contest- Joan
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2020
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Hello Joan. I truly thank you for your wonderful review and encouraging comments. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Mary Vigasin
It is so whimsical and colorful in your display and bringing to life the colors and months of Autumn.
Since Autumn is my favorite time of year, this will written poem caught my attention and brought me into the enjoyment of Autumn.
Your rhyming is perfect.
Well done and good luck in the contests.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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It is so whimsical and colorful in your display and bringing to life the colors and months of Autumn.
Since Autumn is my favorite time of year, this will written poem caught my attention and brought me into the enjoyment of Autumn.
Your rhyming is perfect.
Well done and good luck in the contests.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hi Mary. I am so glad you liked it. Thanks a bunch!
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
This was so lovely, Melissa! I was in the middle of reviewing and then got called away. I'm glad to read it again in a slower pace. You used personification so well and expertly described the subtle "tendrils of changes." Best wishes in the contests!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This was so lovely, Melissa! I was in the middle of reviewing and then got called away. I'm glad to read it again in a slower pace. You used personification so well and expertly described the subtle "tendrils of changes." Best wishes in the contests!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, dear Helen. I really appreciate your wonderful review! Glad you liked it.
Melissa
Comment from robyn corum
Melissa,
THIS is why I was looking for more of your work. *smile* This is just so lovely and it rolls off the tongue easily and with a fluid appeal. The content is also lovely! I can't believe fall is almost here!
Thank you~
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Melissa,
THIS is why I was looking for more of your work. *smile* This is just so lovely and it rolls off the tongue easily and with a fluid appeal. The content is also lovely! I can't believe fall is almost here!
Thank you~
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hi, Sweet Robyn. Your reviews ALWAYS make me smile ... Hubby always asks me why I am smiling when I am on FS... I tell him... it?s Robyn :). Ha. Thanks so much for all of your encouragement and this review too.
Melissa
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HUZZAH! Thank you!
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh, so pretty Miss Melissa!
I love September's rebellious nature...
but...goodbye!!
I LOVE autumn, and I happily say 'see ya'
to September.
This is just wonderful!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Oh, so pretty Miss Melissa!
I love September's rebellious nature...
but...goodbye!!
I LOVE autumn, and I happily say 'see ya'
to September.
This is just wonderful!
Blessings...
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hi Judy. I really appreciate your vibrant review!! I also love Autumn and look forward to the russet reds, and golden yellows... Thanks so much!
Melissa
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Happy first day of Autumn!!
Comment from oliver818
I really enjoyed your use of personification in this poem. It's really beautiful and powerful. The description of each month is really well done.
My favorite line is the one about October. Overall this is a lovely and powerful poemZ Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I really enjoyed your use of personification in this poem. It's really beautiful and powerful. The description of each month is really well done.
My favorite line is the one about October. Overall this is a lovely and powerful poemZ Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello Oliver, thanks so very much for the wonderful review! So appreciated!!
Melissa
Comment from zanya
A poem - a love story really for Mother Nature and her wonderful changes of scenery as the year moves along -beautiful language 'September's puce colored array'
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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A poem - a love story really for Mother Nature and her wonderful changes of scenery as the year moves along -beautiful language 'September's puce colored array'
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hi Zanya, thanks so much for the wonderful review!!
Melissa
Comment from RodG
What a wonderful job you have done PERSONIFYING September as sort of a rebel flaunting her colors and defying Autumn's arrival and Mother Nature standing in the wings amused. But I'm most impressed with your ease in handling amphibrach meter. And that picture is perfect. Overall, a dandy nature poem. Rod
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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What a wonderful job you have done PERSONIFYING September as sort of a rebel flaunting her colors and defying Autumn's arrival and Mother Nature standing in the wings amused. But I'm most impressed with your ease in handling amphibrach meter. And that picture is perfect. Overall, a dandy nature poem. Rod
Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hi Rod... thanks so very much for the wonderful review and rating. I really appreciate your comments and I am SO GLAD you liked it!!
Melissa. :)
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My pleasure always.
Comment from royowen
What a beautifully presented and softly themed and presented, I can only say you've done a superb job on this, the narrative, rhyming, and firm is outstanding and deserves the accolades given, well done Melissa, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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What a beautifully presented and softly themed and presented, I can only say you've done a superb job on this, the narrative, rhyming, and firm is outstanding and deserves the accolades given, well done Melissa, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 21-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Hello Roy. Thanks so much! I always enjoy reading your comments and receiving the encouragement you give!
Melissa
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Well done