Leaves Curling
An equinox spins Fall closer more.41 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words give a hint of fall, are clear and creative. I pondered
on the thought of summer's end - even though I live in Florida and it is
still a hot summer here! I do remember fall in New York. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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The author's words give a hint of fall, are clear and creative. I pondered
on the thought of summer's end - even though I live in Florida and it is
still a hot summer here! I do remember fall in New York. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Smiling back with appreciation, thank you!
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
Wow!! Poetries on season are my favourite..... Well-thought-out and well chosen words... writing in a syllabic pattern is tricky but you nailed it.. Thanks
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Wow!! Poetries on season are my favourite..... Well-thought-out and well chosen words... writing in a syllabic pattern is tricky but you nailed it.. Thanks
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Smiling back with appreciation, thank you!
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Comment from Eternal Muse
This is gorgeous. Terrific descriptive imagery and visuals; awesome artistic presentation and that lovely photo. I feel strongly on the subject; since here in Nevada, we don't get all the seasons; and your poem made me nostalgic for the East Coat. This should do great in the contest; good luck in the booths, my friend.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This is gorgeous. Terrific descriptive imagery and visuals; awesome artistic presentation and that lovely photo. I feel strongly on the subject; since here in Nevada, we don't get all the seasons; and your poem made me nostalgic for the East Coat. This should do great in the contest; good luck in the booths, my friend.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Eternal Muse thank you so much, I certainly understand the contract of Nevada and the East Coast seasonal uniqueness.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Leaves Curling", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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"Leaves Curling", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Duchess, I do thank you, do enjoy your Labor Day weekend.
Dear Anon,
you're welcome. I hope you enjoy your weekend too.
God bless, take care and stay safe!
the Duchess
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The scene is clear and summer fun closes its doors for another year and this is often the first sign that Autumn has taken hold, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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The scene is clear and summer fun closes its doors for another year and this is often the first sign that Autumn has taken hold, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Minglement
I'm less familiar than I should be with this poem form. You have used it nicely to convey melancholy thoughts of seasons change. Beautiful imagery and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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I'm less familiar than I should be with this poem form. You have used it nicely to convey melancholy thoughts of seasons change. Beautiful imagery and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Minglement, thank you haiku is most often written about the contrast of a subject. Ergo the curling leaves, summers end.
Comment from Colin John
They certainly are curling and we have had summer come to and end here so for this short poem it is very thought provoking. good luck in the contest kind regards Colin
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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They certainly are curling and we have had summer come to and end here so for this short poem it is very thought provoking. good luck in the contest kind regards Colin
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Colin, thank you!
Comment from A. Fortier
Anonymous Poster,
Thank you for your submission. It's a short and sweet poem invocative of the immenent season change. Thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
A.Fortier
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Anonymous Poster,
Thank you for your submission. It's a short and sweet poem invocative of the immenent season change. Thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
A.Fortier
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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A. Fortier, your kind words are valued here, thank you!
Comment from Ben Colder
Interesting, I see nothing wrong with this entry. I am ready for the leaves to change colors. A great time of the year and my favorite.
You did well with this. I hope you win.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Interesting, I see nothing wrong with this entry. I am ready for the leaves to change colors. A great time of the year and my favorite.
You did well with this. I hope you win.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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BEm thanks for the kudo's and the support of a win!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Yes, even when the temps are still in the low nineties, there are signs of approaching autumn. Some mornings I feel definite hints of the season I love. You have chosen effective syllables to convey your message about the leaves changing shape before changing colors.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Yes, even when the temps are still in the low nineties, there are signs of approaching autumn. Some mornings I feel definite hints of the season I love. You have chosen effective syllables to convey your message about the leaves changing shape before changing colors.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Janice, little nudges of fog, dew on the windows, fall is sneaking upon us.