Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Barb (barbara.wilkey)
My what sudden shock when I read that Logan was leaving
McKenzie. I say no way can he go to his mission.
I hope he changes his mind. How do we know for sure that Logan has never told McKenzie he loves her.
Gert

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

I'm the author and I made sure he never said it. LOL Logan has no choice. He's in the Army, he as to do what they request of him. Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Gert sherwood on 30-Aug-2020

Barb
So it looks like you will continue writing about McKenzie and how she forget about Logan.
By the way YOU know how to keep me reading your novel.
Gert

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

LOL

reply by Gert sherwood on 30-Aug-2020

LOL back to you
Gert

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

No problem, we, readers do understand the limitations of writers, I think, even an expert writer should revise own works; you are in a recess mood, I like this and have enjoyed the read; now, we are getting the ad-hoc; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thank you for the encouragement.