Matt Wants a Rat
A short rhyming story poem.21 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, what a fun contest entry, Mystery Writer. I like the playfulness and the use of rhyme. Your 'story' has good flow. I like the line about 'rat chat.' The ending is perfect for the rat to ask for a cat.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Haha, what a fun contest entry, Mystery Writer. I like the playfulness and the use of rhyme. Your 'story' has good flow. I like the line about 'rat chat.' The ending is perfect for the rat to ask for a cat.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the nice review! I am happy to read that you liked the ending!