Illicit Lure
The evils of corporate greed25 total reviews
Comment from roof35
This poem is certainly true. You followed all the rules and penned an excellent five/seven/five poem on politics. I guess your illustration pairs because it is an example of a hungry stomach.
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This poem is certainly true. You followed all the rules and penned an excellent five/seven/five poem on politics. I guess your illustration pairs because it is an example of a hungry stomach.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
Comment from write hand blue
A three sentence poem, an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. The wording indicated that people went hungry while corporation profits soared. The last line claimed that the corporations were greedy.
Well written and obeying the rules. Good luck with the prompt. ~Mel~
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A three sentence poem, an entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt. The wording indicated that people went hungry while corporation profits soared. The last line claimed that the corporations were greedy.
Well written and obeying the rules. Good luck with the prompt. ~Mel~
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
Comment from MilaAco
I love short poems that make a true statement. The corporate greed is real, and I think it always has been and always will. thank you for sharing!
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I love short poems that make a true statement. The corporate greed is real, and I think it always has been and always will. thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Greed can be a powerful tool in building a company... or can simply be a mislabeled drive of personal ambition... interesting to consider what the difference would be and if it is the observer that sees a difference... Good offering for the contest - good luck! ;)
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Greed can be a powerful tool in building a company... or can simply be a mislabeled drive of personal ambition... interesting to consider what the difference would be and if it is the observer that sees a difference... Good offering for the contest - good luck! ;)
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, clear and creative. I found these
words strongly meet the contest guidelines! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Hope you are having a great day!
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The author's words are engaging, clear and creative. I found these
words strongly meet the contest guidelines! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem.
Hope you are having a great day!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thanks so much for the review, Harmony! I truly appreciate the kind words. Have a great day, also.
