Sunday Funday
An uplifting poem for these times.49 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a short, easy to read and understand poem. It should do well in the 5-7-9 writing prompt. I enjoyed it, and I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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This is a short, easy to read and understand poem. It should do well in the 5-7-9 writing prompt. I enjoyed it, and I hope you do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your insightful comments and goodf wishes.
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You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Seems like you covered a relaxing scenario of wine and cheese for the body and jazz music for the soul with rest for the feet as well. Nicely done with the assonance of long 'i' sounds (hi fi wine high) Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Seems like you covered a relaxing scenario of wine and cheese for the body and jazz music for the soul with rest for the feet as well. Nicely done with the assonance of long 'i' sounds (hi fi wine high) Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your great review. Have fun on Sunday...I wish you well.
Comment from ameen786
Yes indeed, a wonderful and sumptuous combo for an uplift, but is this a "Virtual" only? You did not give your address, he-he. Thanks for the delightful treat and good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Yes indeed, a wonderful and sumptuous combo for an uplift, but is this a "Virtual" only? You did not give your address, he-he. Thanks for the delightful treat and good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you for the delightful review, dear poet. For sure, for a Sunday feast, the more the better....
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt contest.
--Good syllable count.
--The connection between lines is okay..it can be improved to facilitate the poem's flow. --The topic of relaxing is good.
Good luck.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 5-7-9 writing prompt contest.
--Good syllable count.
--The connection between lines is okay..it can be improved to facilitate the poem's flow. --The topic of relaxing is good.
Good luck.
Gypsy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy.
Comment from mauial
Haven't heard the words hi-fi in ages.ð??? Nothing like kicking back relaxing with your choice of booze and music after a tiring work week is the picture I get from this piece.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Haven't heard the words hi-fi in ages.ð??? Nothing like kicking back relaxing with your choice of booze and music after a tiring work week is the picture I get from this piece.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you for reading my work and for the tease about hi-fi. New equipmebt is too complicated for me...
Comment from Mia Twysted
This sounds like something we all need. To sit back and let the music take us away from all the problems we and the world have. TIme to just center ourselves.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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This sounds like something we all need. To sit back and let the music take us away from all the problems we and the world have. TIme to just center ourselves.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Mia.
Comment from royowen
There's nothing better than cheese, Metwurst, bread and winE, as a taste sensation they can't be matched, as lie here, mouth watering, wishing I could be there, beautifully written my friend, good luck in the comp. blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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There's nothing better than cheese, Metwurst, bread and winE, as a taste sensation they can't be matched, as lie here, mouth watering, wishing I could be there, beautifully written my friend, good luck in the comp. blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Hi Roy, thank you for enjoying my lines here.
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Bless you
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-9, Sunday Funday, has the proper formatting and sees that the tunes are playing, the eats are in reach, and the situation is cozy. Nice.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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This 5-7-9, Sunday Funday, has the proper formatting and sees that the tunes are playing, the eats are in reach, and the situation is cozy. Nice.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Bill Schott for reading and commenting in my poet.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your descriptive, uplifting 5-7-9 poem. Your right this is an uplifting poem for the times we are living in. I can hear the Jazz and taste the wine relaxing on my couch, as I read it. I like your artwork choice. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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I enjoyed reading your descriptive, uplifting 5-7-9 poem. Your right this is an uplifting poem for the times we are living in. I can hear the Jazz and taste the wine relaxing on my couch, as I read it. I like your artwork choice. Best wishes!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2020
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Thank you, angel 12 for liking my poem, and for your good wishes.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Be sure to save me a place on the recliner there.... oh, and I'll have white wine if you have it! ;) ;) A wonderful offering for the 5-7-9 - thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) :)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Be sure to save me a place on the recliner there.... oh, and I'll have white wine if you have it! ;) ;) A wonderful offering for the 5-7-9 - thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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I like wine, all wines my friend, especially if they are free...!