Summer Sunrise
Reprieve is but a foolish notion...26 total reviews
Comment from The Death
I loved the imagery you present here. Excellent word economy as you utilized each syllable well. Fine use of alliteration and consonance in this short space. Lovely presentation as well. This should do well in the prompt. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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I loved the imagery you present here. Excellent word economy as you utilized each syllable well. Fine use of alliteration and consonance in this short space. Lovely presentation as well. This should do well in the prompt. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine 5-7-9 with the ambiance of a soothing sunset just before the flame goes out and the darkness descends, there is some reluctance here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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A fine 5-7-9 with the ambiance of a soothing sunset just before the flame goes out and the darkness descends, there is some reluctance here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review. Stay cool!
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Wow!!! This is an exceptional poem. Our only disappointment with this is that we don't have a 6 тн? review to give you, it's probably better than ours. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful night.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Wow!!! This is an exceptional poem. Our only disappointment with this is that we don't have a 6 тн? review to give you, it's probably better than ours. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely beautiful. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful night.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your lovely review. Stay cool!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
With temps in the nineties and heat indices well over a hundred, I look back and wonder how we stood it without air conditioning years ago!
Your poem is lovely and vividly descriptive. As we look at the lovely sunrise, we know what's coming--unlovely scorching heat!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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With temps in the nineties and heat indices well over a hundred, I look back and wonder how we stood it without air conditioning years ago!
Your poem is lovely and vividly descriptive. As we look at the lovely sunrise, we know what's coming--unlovely scorching heat!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your wonderful review. Stay cool!
Comment from Carlos' girl
Indeed, I can feel.the heat and see it in your words. Nice use of language creating the image..something so ominous about summer in the city. Your poem conveys that
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Indeed, I can feel.the heat and see it in your words. Nice use of language creating the image..something so ominous about summer in the city. Your poem conveys that
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review. Be sure to stop by again sometime!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Writer. The image is beautiful and perfect for your words. Good use of 's' alliteration, your syllable count is correct per line, ther's good imagery, and your message is clear. With each new sunrise seems to come more heat.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Writer. The image is beautiful and perfect for your words. Good use of 's' alliteration, your syllable count is correct per line, ther's good imagery, and your message is clear. With each new sunrise seems to come more heat.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Many thanks for your review.