Comment from Vanna1

Excellent

The words and the image compliment each other very nicely. This is a "juicy" romantic piece, very "sweet"! Lol! A good choice in wordplay to convey passion.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020

Thank you, Vanna

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 contribution to the multi author book Renga. A product of multioke authors putting their piece of the puzzle in to get a great picture at the end

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020

Thank you, Sandra.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly symbolic piece. You have conveyed a sweet message about a richly blessed couple for whom all is going perfectly.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020

Thank you, Janice, for the kind review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and
presentation, Bill.
-A good haiku for the book
with good syllable count
and nature imagery.
-You create a good word
picture of the scene, as well.
-I like the concept of the
ocean, berries, and wine.
-Well done.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020

Thank you, Pam, for the kind review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-Jul-2020

You are welcome, Bill.

Comment from Bobby Cunningham

Excellent

Wow! The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely beautiful. Combined with your chosen colors and you created an elegant presentation. The poem itself is romantic and truly lovely. Have a wonderful day.

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020

Thank you, Bobby and Millie, for the kind review.