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Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7

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Comment from Aussie
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Is the painting one of Monet's? I get the funeral drift. Is the orchard the flower of the lilies? I think I must be having a senior's moment. So...why does the orchard withdraw? New life after floating death?

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
    Yes it is one of Monet's. The orchard withdraws because the fruit from the trees has been devoured by hungry birds in the previous posting from Mrs. K.T. Thank you so much always, K. :))

    Gloria
reply by Aussie on 25-Jul-2020
    Bad, bad birdies! :-( xx
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Funeral procession under the footbridge, looks like one of those Asian fair well parties with candles, and written notes of good bye. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much Iza for a great review. :))

    Gloria
Comment from Sally Law
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A beautiful addition to the book, dear Gloria. You have added your unique quality and style. The gorgeous photo compliments your fine short verse.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for your endeavors,
Sally xoxo

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2020


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much always, Sally. :))

    Gloria