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The Squall

Tarpon fishing with Captain Jeb

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Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sally, you just know don't you. I have sailed most of my life and sometimes I'd had that foreboding as well. And I've learned to listen to it. Never fails. you all had a lucky escape.
This is not a correction, but the true saying goes as this:

Red sky at night shepherd's delight
Red sky in the morning, shepherd's warning.

The saying goes back to time immortal.
All best. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    I think this adage applies to every vocation and every person that works outside. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story and I appreciate your time and talent as always,
    Sally XOs....
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written true story about that inner warning system we often ignore and every time it us proven to be a warning to not do what we want but listen. The best lessons are learned the hard way.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments, dear Sandra. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. Sending you my best today as always, Sally XOs...
Comment from Father Flaps
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Wow! Now that's what I call a story, Sally. I enjoyed it from start to finish. There's no possible way I'd go out in a small boat like that into the Gulf of Mexico. I have a great imagination, and all I'd be able to think about would be sharks. Captain Jeb, eh? I bet his real name was Kramer!
I think the only way I'd go out in southern waters would be on a Disney cruise ship!
Good Luck in the contest! I think this is a winner! Nicely penned.
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    My husband grew up boating and quite apt at driving a boat, and is an avid water-skier, barefoot skiing in times past. The angry sea doesn't give a rip; and tore into us (and anyone) who dares to come in. Our first date was water skiing and then I took him to the Navy base for bowling. I bowled decent, thankfully. Boys and water and toys... what can I say?

    Your review is so very kind, and generous stars so pleasing! Thank you, Kimbob. It's nice to be here to receive them. :)

    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh my goodness! What a great story. I loved the humor you put into it and how you wove the thread of the "voice" and the great words from Scripture all together to make a riveting story! I think you'll do well in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you much for the lovely review and kind compliments. Yes, I have learned very well to listen to the voice after this episode. Sending you my best today as always, Sally XOs.....
Comment from Debra White
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Hello Sal,
Blimey, that sounds like such a frightening experience. I'm sure I would've been hysterical.
I know the voice you're talking about and it's always right!
Thank you for sharing your well written account of your family's experience and good luck in the contest.
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind compliments dear Debra. Your kind reviews are always so appreciated and needed.
    Sending my best today as always,
    Sally XOs.....
Comment from Cindy Warren
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You're braver than I am. I likely wouldn't have gotten on that boat, or allowed my children to. I certainly would have insisted on returning to shore as soon as I saw the sky. Glad everything turned out OK. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for the lovely review, dear Cindy. Your kind review and comments are always so appreciated.
    Sending my best today as always,
    Sally XOs.....
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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What a harrowing story! I was in the grip of it right off the bat. I know about that inner voice, my gut feeling, my intuition. God gave women a strong dose of that to protect us. Wonderful story! You've got a winner here.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you SO much for the wonderful review and shower of stars, Rebecca dear. It is so appreciated. Your kindness is overwhelming. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs......
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 14-Aug-2020
    You are ever so welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Whew! Talk about close calls. The praying is what turned things around.
Through a logically-flowing series of specific descriptions, you have recounted your family's encounter with terror.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Whew, is right. I'm so glad I lived to tell about this one. Thanks so much for the wonderful review and kind comments. It is always so appreciated, dear Janice.
    Sending you my best today as always, Sally XOs......
Comment from fm wright
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What an exciting, but hair raising story. It is good to have those stories from the bible to comfort us, and yes, that voice is there for good reason. Great share. Loved the picture and video. Best wishes with this contest entry.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Ah, thank you, Faye dear. Your constant encouragement and support, and the generous stars, mean the world to me. I appreciate it all... and you!!
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Sally, excellent real life story about getting into a dangerous situation after not listening to your inner voice. You did a great job of making the reader feel a part of the adventure. That is great advice that we all need to listen to. Bill

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments, dear Bill. It's always good to hear from you and read your reviews. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
reply by Bill Pinder on 16-Aug-2020