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Clue

Murder solved

33 total reviews 
Comment from Gloria ....
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Talk about a blind clue that managed to reveal the true criminal.

I must admit I've never played Clue, but that characters are quite well-known.

Excellent flash dear Sal with all the required elements of a flash story present and accounted for.

Wishing you great luck with the voters.

Gloria

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
    Ah, thank you, dear Gloria. I wrote this while I was up late roaming the house. Can you tell? Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xoxo
Comment from SixFtLion (Suzanna)
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There is a lot of action in this 75-word flash story. I loved how you played with the words, ruffling Mr. Peacock's feathers :) And it was also a surprising ending. Good luck in the contest, Sally!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much. I'm pleased you enjoyed this one. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from Sankey
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Haha loved this. Cluedo was one of my favourite board games. I bought a Windows version years ago but I never got around it and now it is out of sync with Windows 10 bleach. Where are your Double Blind stories?

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    Thank you, Geoff. I'm glad you enjoyed my story for the flash. Double Blind #12 will be posting this Sunday. I post it bi-weekly. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xoxo
Comment from royowen
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What a great sense of humour you have Sally. It's a wonderful entry in this 75 words contest. It's hard to compile a whole plot in a few words, but by gad you've done it. Well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
    I do have a heightened sense of humor. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I was up all night couldn't sleep and thought up the story. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
reply by royowen on 09-Jul-2020
    Well done
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hah!
Good one, Sally!
Professor Plum is "losing it," I would say!
Love the final line, and your story progresses very well given the parameters of a 75 words!
Much enjoyed!

diane

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 09-Jul-2020
    Oh, I'm glad to bring some cheer to fan story today with this one. So glad you enjoyed it, dear Diane. Thanks so much for chiming in. Sending my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from sibhus
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A well written take on the game of Clue. Well done, a complete story in seventy five words and the ending is really amusing. This makes for an excellent entry to the contest and good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind kind comments, dear sibhus. It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a great story entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction writing prompt. You were able to get the complete story written in such a small amount of words. This is a good solid contest entry.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    I don't know if you have the Baird game in Thailand, but it's very popular here in the states, especially during pandemic lockdown. The inspiration for my piece, Clue. Typically, I either Mrs. Peacock or Miss Scarlett. A fun game I brought to life here. So glad you enjoyed this this spoof. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xoxo
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 06-Jul-2020
    I never heard of the Baird game, and have not seen it in Thailand. It's good folks are getting back to board games!
Comment from damommy
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I LOVE that game. I always thought Miss Scarlet was a woman of the night. lol. Imagine Prof. Plum trying to lay the blame on you. The video was just right for this.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    I can't get enough of this game and my grandkids are always pulling me into it. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. Thanks again for the lovely review. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Sally,

Great memories of that game of Clue, which you shared with us in your contest entry. You captured the thrill of discovering who did it. Like your Plum ending - a good 'twist.'

Mark

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind comments, dear Mark. So glad you could stop by. Sending my best today as always, Sally :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A touch of Cluedo here for us to enjoy Sally and the murder mystery continues. This is a fun post, much enjoyed, the whodunnit never fails to entertain, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2020
    Thank you so much for stopping and reviewing my work, Dolly dear. I so appreciate you. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo