Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a night vision, telling what the stars create in the longing for love; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this; keep writing. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020

Thanks very mcu

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I struggled with the meter but I thought you captured the yearning and heart aching and the sorrow, and you made me smile with this line: "my heart was ready to erect a shrine" are you sure it was your heart here? He he he, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020

Dolly thank I know it is not tight but I felt I did have more prior to this, the fall class can't start soon enough for my needs. :) Have a delightful weekend!

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

There is nothing quite like a dream, a hope, or a wish denied. When we wake up to reality, it can be most painful. This is what I understand you to be saying in this poem. I hope I got it right!

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 Comment Written 06-Jun-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2020

Rebecca you are spot on!

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 06-Jun-2020

Oh, that makes me so happy. Ha ha