Reviews from

Geoffrey's Musings.

Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Molly Mouse"
A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.

25 total reviews 
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

It is amazing how we can become attached to various objects. Seems as if Molly has performed very well for you. Now comes the time to say good by.
Good one Sankey.

 Comment Written 31-May-2020


reply by the author on 31-May-2020
    Bro Ben I wish we could repair her faed old coat. She does not look as good these days as the pictures taken in much earlier times. Thanks for your lovely review.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    I know you probably won't get a reward but a second verse has now been added if you care to look.
reply by Ben Colder on 14-Jul-2020
    Yes , I see nothing wrong with addition
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Thanks for checking it out. Some had suggested maybe a repair so great we can do that.
Comment from tfawcus
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The sands of time were ever thus! Poor Molly. Not only a faithful door stopper but a poet's muse! It sounds as though she'd be worth stitching up. It's wonderful what modern surgery can do to prolong life.

 Comment Written 31-May-2020


reply by the author on 31-May-2020
    Yeah well after 34 years (we got her before our wedding) she is pretty faded. It would be nice if our embroiderer stitcher friend would fix her coat. Thanks mate.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    I know you probably won't get a reward but a second verse has now been added if you care to look.
reply by tfawcus on 14-Jul-2020
    Glad to see a happy ending for Molly or, rather, a new beginning!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    Thanks mate.Thanks for checking it out. Some had suggested maybe a repair so great we can do that.
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

We'll need to get a look at the new Molly duds once she's redone. Oh I am typing now to fill this line. I could probably say something good about your addition to the poem. Hey! Good job!

 Comment Written 31-May-2020


reply by the author on 31-May-2020
    Thanks Bill I don't believe we have met before. Appreciate your lovely, commiserating review. Will look for your stuff.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    I know you probably won't get a reward but a second verse has now been added if you care to look.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is an original--verse about a deceased door stopper. Amusing footnote re gently to the feet no brick in butt. Whimsical verse--condolences on your loss. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 31-May-2020


reply by the author on 31-May-2020
    Awww thanks Liz for the sympathy. She really was part of the family. Just so sorry I have not been able to get in touch with the lady who made her all those years ago.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    I know you probably won't get a reward but a second verse has now been added if you care to look.
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 14-Jul-2020
    Wonderful! So glad Molly was resurrected. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Got an idea. Take Molly to a seamstress and have her weak parts replaced with new material or a new dress made with sewn on underwear. She's probably leaking from the bottom.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 31-May-2020


reply by the author on 31-May-2020
    Hi Rebecca, you are probably right and I am sure she is repairable. Her coat is much faded unlike the picture s taken bacxk in her "younger" days. Thanks for the lovely review.
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 31-May-2020
    You're quite welcome.

    I seldom throw things away especially if they have been with me forever. I repair them.
reply by the author on 31-May-2020
    Yeah well I still hope we can do that. Thanks for the encouragement.
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 31-May-2020
    /you're welcome.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020
    I know you probably won't get a reward but a second verse has now been added if you care to look.