Prayers for Fanstory Family
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Cry in the Night "Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians
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Comment from Pantygynt
Clearly written for the benefit of a fellow Fanstorian, this uses a tight little form with which I am connected, though the bulk of the the credit for its creation in reality belongs to Carol. I just gave it a name. Keep your chin up Mary K. We are thinking of you.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Clearly written for the benefit of a fellow Fanstorian, this uses a tight little form with which I am connected, though the bulk of the the credit for its creation in reality belongs to Carol. I just gave it a name. Keep your chin up Mary K. We are thinking of you.
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Jim! It's to no avail that you keep saying you only gave it a name - your name is forever associated with the form. ☺
Appreciate your kind thoughts for Mary K - they've survived the virus and still have more struggles.
Please stay safe and healthy!
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I'll try.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have not seen this form before and you did it justice Helen and your poem is appropriate for Sunday. Words filled with faith and hope and the world is indeed crying right now inside desperation, much enjoyed, have a great Sunday, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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I have not seen this form before and you did it justice Helen and your poem is appropriate for Sunday. Words filled with faith and hope and the world is indeed crying right now inside desperation, much enjoyed, have a great Sunday, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you, Dolly! We just finished church via Zoom. It's an odd feeling of almost connecting.
Have a lovely day!
Hugs!
Comment from LisaMay
I hope the 'fervent cry' contained in your poem has a healing response for Jorge and is a comfort to Mary Kay. Sharing difficult times is a lovely service of community in prayer.
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I hope the 'fervent cry' contained in your poem has a healing response for Jorge and is a comfort to Mary Kay. Sharing difficult times is a lovely service of community in prayer.
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Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much, LisaMay! I know God hears our prayers! Hugs!
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Thank you so much, Helen, for this beautiful, impassioned prayer poem for my husband -- it goes for me too, because I was so distressed by his condition when I called 911, and for a number of reasons (not all of which I know or understand), I am often feeling disturbed, being alone.
The Sapphonic Triad is a complex and beautiful form, and you have filled it well -- the scripture verse selection is perfect, and the lines of your poem are full of empathy, comforting and thought-provoking.
Thank you, my friend! I am deeply touched. May the Lord hear and answer our heartfelt prayers. Amen.
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Helen, for this beautiful, impassioned prayer poem for my husband -- it goes for me too, because I was so distressed by his condition when I called 911, and for a number of reasons (not all of which I know or understand), I am often feeling disturbed, being alone.
The Sapphonic Triad is a complex and beautiful form, and you have filled it well -- the scripture verse selection is perfect, and the lines of your poem are full of empathy, comforting and thought-provoking.
Thank you, my friend! I am deeply touched. May the Lord hear and answer our heartfelt prayers. Amen.
Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 17-May-2020
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Amen! I can imagine how you must have felt and I cry out with you! May the Lord hear us and heal Jorge! Oh, and thanks for reviewing and the six stars. Hugs!
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You're welcome, Helen. You just helped me feel a little bit less lonely. Your poem is a comfort. Hallelujah!
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♥♥ My husband and I prayed for you both!
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I deeply appreciate that. ❤❤❤