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Winds of change37 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Sally. Your poem adheres to the rules nicely. You are right. The winds of change are always bloin' in--some good, some bad. But there's no stoppin' them. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Sally. Your poem adheres to the rules nicely. You are right. The winds of change are always bloin' in--some good, some bad. But there's no stoppin' them. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you, dear Jan. I have a moon one coming soon you may like. I'm pleased you enjoyed this one, too. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you, Raul. I always appreciate your kind words and compliments. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent entry, Sally. It offers good imagery and emotions. I especially like the term 'wild winds' The addition of the Cat Stevens video is a bonus for members. (I love squirrels and feed them every day.) :-)
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This is an excellent entry, Sally. It offers good imagery and emotions. I especially like the term 'wild winds' The addition of the Cat Stevens video is a bonus for members. (I love squirrels and feed them every day.) :-)
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Aw, thank you, dear Janet. I actually did it so quickly. It came together in a spiritual way.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a good metaphor, Sally. There are definitely wild winds in the air--winds that are changing not just the landscapes, but the very foundations of our lives as well.
I like the wild hair theme that you've got going here and in another poem that you wrote lately. Works for me.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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This is a good metaphor, Sally. There are definitely wild winds in the air--winds that are changing not just the landscapes, but the very foundations of our lives as well.
I like the wild hair theme that you've got going here and in another poem that you wrote lately. Works for me.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you so much, dear Debbie. I'm glad your could see the deeper meaning of my four line poem. Seriously, my hair is always atangle.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Susan Larson
Sally, you say so much in so few words and yet open up so much to the reader's imagination. With that delicate font sweeping across the page and your faded out colors, it also adds to the mystique of your story.
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Sally, you say so much in so few words and yet open up so much to the reader's imagination. With that delicate font sweeping across the page and your faded out colors, it also adds to the mystique of your story.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments. It is so appreciated and needed. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A tousled life always makes for an interesting poem. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. This poem flowed nicely. I am wondering exactly what is going on in this girl's life. I guess I will never know. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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A tousled life always makes for an interesting poem. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. This poem flowed nicely. I am wondering exactly what is going on in this girl's life. I guess I will never know. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Yes, it does! My life certainly is tousled right now. Thank you so much for the wonderful review and understanding in these things. I appreciate you so much.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo!!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
That wind blown look is so much better looking than the fan blown hairdo. The wind tousled look makes you look young like you can take on any tousled life crisis, whatever may be.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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That wind blown look is so much better looking than the fan blown hairdo. The wind tousled look makes you look young like you can take on any tousled life crisis, whatever may be.
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind comments, dear Rebecca. I always value what you have to say. Sending my best today as always, Sally xoxo
Comment from fm wright
What a great metaphor you used in describing how things can so drastically change in our life from moment to moment.i say this because here in Amarillo, Texas, we have a saying, "If you don't like the weather, wait fifteen minutes. it'll change." That is why your poem affects me so. Really nicely done, and with a great picture, to boot. I wish you the best with it in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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What a great metaphor you used in describing how things can so drastically change in our life from moment to moment.i say this because here in Amarillo, Texas, we have a saying, "If you don't like the weather, wait fifteen minutes. it'll change." That is why your poem affects me so. Really nicely done, and with a great picture, to boot. I wish you the best with it in the contest!
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Aw, how kind you are, dear Faye. I appreciate you so much. Your generous spirit and star shower mean so much. I am blessed in the midst of so many things difficulties going on right now. Thank you!! This means the world to me.
Sending my best today as always,
Sally xoxoxo!!!!
Comment from Louise Michelle
The Houston humidity has come back after some nice spring like days and I can't write very well - it just wipes out all my energy. But I did want to give this a read. You did a terrific job - chose your words carefully, held much meaning. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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The Houston humidity has come back after some nice spring like days and I can't write very well - it just wipes out all my energy. But I did want to give this a read. You did a terrific job - chose your words carefully, held much meaning. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and for making the effort although you're not feeling well. That means the most because I'm certainly not feeling so great myself! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you have an improved week. Sally xoxo
Comment from Drew Delaney
A really nice short poem which opens a window of imaginary thoughts and the concrete past for some of us. You did well and offer a nice presentation as well.
Have a nice day!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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A really nice short poem which opens a window of imaginary thoughts and the concrete past for some of us. You did well and offer a nice presentation as well.
Have a nice day!
Drew xx
Comment Written 12-May-2020
reply by the author on 12-May-2020
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Thank you very much for the lovely review, dear Drew. Your kind review is always means so much to me. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxoxo