Just Once More
A Canzonetta poem for Potlatch Poetry26 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so very beautiful and I think you skill and talent just ooze out of the Canzonetta. This form is new to me, but I really like it. I think I will give it a try soon. :). Wonderfully done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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This is so very beautiful and I think you skill and talent just ooze out of the Canzonetta. This form is new to me, but I really like it. I think I will give it a try soon. :). Wonderfully done.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you. Yes, you will do wonders with it.
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
It is really very good. I really like it. My favorite part is, beside the enchanted Brook I stood, remembering a song once heard. It's very beautiful and poetic, I love it.
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It is really very good. I really like it. My favorite part is, beside the enchanted Brook I stood, remembering a song once heard. It's very beautiful and poetic, I love it.
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you. I'm so happy you did.
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Thanks!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is skillfully-written, vividly descriptive, and lovely. It is a moving blend of nature, romance (whether he's actually there in stanza 2 or not), and sweet music.
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Your poem is skillfully-written, vividly descriptive, and lovely. It is a moving blend of nature, romance (whether he's actually there in stanza 2 or not), and sweet music.
Comment Written 02-May-2020
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Thank you for this great review.
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a beautiful response to the weekly challenge. I would love to be in that wood and hear that tune. I like how you leave the fantasy open for interpretation as to who or what "he" might be.
Well done. Thanks for sharing this fantasy.
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reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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This is a beautiful response to the weekly challenge. I would love to be in that wood and hear that tune. I like how you leave the fantasy open for interpretation as to who or what "he" might be.
Well done. Thanks for sharing this fantasy.
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Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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I've written about this before. I'm going to put it all in a book here on FS. Thank you. I'm glad you entered my fantasy world.
Comment from Drew Delaney
Oh, my Yvonne. What a beautiful poem to read. I just love it. I can sense standing near the brook, listening to the beautiful sounds of nature and the tune awaited. Absolutely stunning. I wish I had a six star.
Drew xx
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reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Oh, my Yvonne. What a beautiful poem to read. I just love it. I can sense standing near the brook, listening to the beautiful sounds of nature and the tune awaited. Absolutely stunning. I wish I had a six star.
Drew xx
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Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you so much. Your wonderful comments are enough for me.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your presentation is super, Yvonne. I love the picture you paired with your well-chosen words. The cursive font adds to the beauty, too. It reminds me of the Victorian Era when beautiful 'things' were cherished and/or flaunted. Your rhyme scheme is perfect--love 'sycamore.' Also, the meter is great ( as usual). This seems to be about two lovers who are apart for whatever reason. She returns to their special place and can see him and hear their tune. Also, it could be about one who ventures into the forest hoping to catch sight of a fairy that she saw once before--and she does. Thanks for sharing a great example of this style.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your presentation is super, Yvonne. I love the picture you paired with your well-chosen words. The cursive font adds to the beauty, too. It reminds me of the Victorian Era when beautiful 'things' were cherished and/or flaunted. Your rhyme scheme is perfect--love 'sycamore.' Also, the meter is great ( as usual). This seems to be about two lovers who are apart for whatever reason. She returns to their special place and can see him and hear their tune. Also, it could be about one who ventures into the forest hoping to catch sight of a fairy that she saw once before--and she does. Thanks for sharing a great example of this style.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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You got it. It's about the fairy she once saw. Thank you for this exceptional review. I appreciate it so very much.
