Daily Decisions
Realize that even the small ones affect your direction...23 total reviews
Comment from DeboraDyess
A beautiful poem with total truth behind it! Your formatting is perfect - no corrections needed. It's such a well written tetractys. I think you'll do well in the contest. I'll have to watch for the voting to begin. :)
Blessings and stay safe,
Deb
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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A beautiful poem with total truth behind it! Your formatting is perfect - no corrections needed. It's such a well written tetractys. I think you'll do well in the contest. I'll have to watch for the voting to begin. :)
Blessings and stay safe,
Deb
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review and your wonderful comments - so good to hear from you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
"choice,
once made,
nimbly molds" You are so right, everyday we are faced with simple decisions that can complicate our life the minute we choose. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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"choice,
once made,
nimbly molds" You are so right, everyday we are faced with simple decisions that can complicate our life the minute we choose. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you for the review and your wonderful comments - so good to hear from you!
Comment from LisaMay
Your presentation is appealing, showing different paths up for choice, possibly even the road less travelled, the path not taken, and explaining how these choices influence our future. (I don't agree that choice will always 'gently mold life's present path' - sometimes it might kill us.)
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Your presentation is appealing, showing different paths up for choice, possibly even the road less travelled, the path not taken, and explaining how these choices influence our future. (I don't agree that choice will always 'gently mold life's present path' - sometimes it might kill us.)
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2020
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Yes, but fatally is three syllables... wink-wink! Thank you for your review!
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... how about 'deftly' ?
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the d's a bit harsh... whatcha think about 'nimbly'...?
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Yes... it's a more interesting word than soppy 'gently'.
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Okay! The non-soppy 'nimbly' it is! Have a great evening!
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You too!
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I forgot to mention I like the 'm' repeats in 'nimbly molds'.
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That's what I was aiming for with it... great minds think alike, yes?
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Mmmm.