The Masked Truck
1947 Chevy Truck showdown21 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
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This is a unique and timely entry for the contest, Patricia. Nice to be able to smile during this most stressful of times.
Only one small comment. Suggest " neath" to replace "b'neath" in the third stanza.
Best of luck.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Hahaha
This is a unique and timely entry for the contest, Patricia. Nice to be able to smile during this most stressful of times.
Only one small comment. Suggest " neath" to replace "b'neath" in the third stanza.
Best of luck.
Stay safe healthy and blessed
Julia
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Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2020
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Thank you, Julia. I appreciate your review and tip. I started with 'neath' but wasn't sure it was enough. I'll make the change.
Patricia