It's All About Love
a contest entry37 total reviews
Comment from TPAC
I see you did, finding in this particular write a smooth flow, captivating word usage throughout its read, concluding my review as a creative conveyance. All stated in my opinion.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I see you did, finding in this particular write a smooth flow, captivating word usage throughout its read, concluding my review as a creative conveyance. All stated in my opinion.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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TPAC my friend,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments.
Stay safe and well.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from June Sargent
I'm glad this piece placed well in the contest. The words are so true. We are all in a race and there are no losers, except for those who choose to give up. Love is the motivating force that can sustain us in the worst of times: Love of God and love of neighbor.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I'm glad this piece placed well in the contest. The words are so true. We are all in a race and there are no losers, except for those who choose to give up. Love is the motivating force that can sustain us in the worst of times: Love of God and love of neighbor.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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June,
As always I appreciate your review and comments.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from RShipp
You met the necessary criteria beautifully: Write a five line poem that creates a mood, picture, or feeling. The first word of each line is in alphabetical order. Line 5 can begin with any letter.
Enjoyed. And congratulations.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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You met the necessary criteria beautifully: Write a five line poem that creates a mood, picture, or feeling. The first word of each line is in alphabetical order. Line 5 can begin with any letter.
Enjoyed. And congratulations.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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RShipp,
Thanks so much for the congrats., review and very kind comments they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Well done in creating strong emotion in your poem. You followed the restrictions of the form and, in only five lines, still managed to create a poem that is filled with joy, sound, sound advice, and love. - Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Well done in creating strong emotion in your poem. You followed the restrictions of the form and, in only five lines, still managed to create a poem that is filled with joy, sound, sound advice, and love. - Wendy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Wendy,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Alchera
A good five lined entry which also includes three rhymed lines of good structural level and significant.The last line does not follow the prompts rules required but on the other hand it flows well throughout its religious loving content lines. A good job!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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A good five lined entry which also includes three rhymed lines of good structural level and significant.The last line does not follow the prompts rules required but on the other hand it flows well throughout its religious loving content lines. A good job!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thank you kindly for you review and comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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Always welcomed!Blessings Tony
Comment from Rmocruz
You have effectively conformed to the writing prompt with this poetically
presented positive message. I found this to be well penned as well as solidly rhymed.
Best wishes with this promising contest entry.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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You have effectively conformed to the writing prompt with this poetically
presented positive message. I found this to be well penned as well as solidly rhymed.
Best wishes with this promising contest entry.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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You're welcome Portia, my pleasure.
Blessings as well!
~Rich
Comment from Minglement
Well, this lovely entry in the Writing prompt contest certainly creates an almost tangible mood and feeling. Such joy expressed and followed the alphabetical rules without losing a thing :) Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Well, this lovely entry in the Writing prompt contest certainly creates an almost tangible mood and feeling. Such joy expressed and followed the alphabetical rules without losing a thing :) Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Minglement,
I pray you are feeling better, thanks so much for your review and comments my friend. Have a good night.
Blessings...Portia
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My pleasure. I am improving, thanks :)
Comment from Puzzle
This is a very challenging contest but I think you nailed it! It is beautifully done. And I love the layout and the quote chosen as your picture! Good luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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This is a very challenging contest but I think you nailed it! It is beautifully done. And I love the layout and the quote chosen as your picture! Good luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Puzzle,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are joyous, filled with kindness, loving and creative.
What a great poem! I love it! The artwork you chose says it all. The words of your poem reflects the quote so well. Words your readers
need to hear during this difficult time. Thank you....
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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The author's words are joyous, filled with kindness, loving and creative.
What a great poem! I love it! The artwork you chose says it all. The words of your poem reflects the quote so well. Words your readers
need to hear during this difficult time. Thank you....
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review.
Blessings...
Comment from Bichon
This was a creative piece. I liked how you emphasised the different things love can make us feel and accomplish. Best of luck in the contest with your great entry.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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This was a creative piece. I liked how you emphasised the different things love can make us feel and accomplish. Best of luck in the contest with your great entry.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you kindly. Stay well!
Blessings