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God Is Looking Upon Mankind

He sees all...

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Comment from June Sargent
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You have quoted some of my favorite scriptures. During this crisis Isaiah 40:31 gives me the strength to keep going, even though I may be exhausted. Hopefully we will see light at the end of the tunnel soon!

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    June,
    Stay strong and well my friend. I am much like you, I continue to rely on God's word and healing scriptures to see me through. Thanks so much for your review.

    Blessings...Portia




















Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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It is now when we need to stand together and help one another, like we always should have been doing. You did a great job with this and it's perfect for the world right now.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    My Friend,

    Your words are very true and wise.

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...

    Blessings...Portia

Comment from TheManojArora
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It's simple. SImple rhyming scheme. The last line can be rephrased in my opinion.

I have to admit I do not see much in spiritual poems.

But Keep writing. ! All the best.

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thanks so much for your review. Sorry you do not see much in spiritual poems. Looking forward in reviewing your work. Stay well...

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Let God work, for He is looking at us, and let the Holy Spirit work in you giving others strength and God's light will fade away this virus; we should never worry; truly said.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from Brenda Henderson
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Thank you for sharing these hope filled inspired verses that are so timely and much needed at such as time as this. The artwork is perfect here. Good job.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Brenda,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...

    Blessings...Portia
reply by Brenda Henderson on 28-Mar-2020
    You're very welcome Portia!
Comment from harmony13
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The author's are filled with hope, have a message, and are creative.
The reader pondered on the positive message this poem gives. The
reader thought about how trust and prayer gets her through each day.
The author's words and artwork chosen are calming - thank you.
Have a good Saturday.....

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
    Harmony,

    Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay well...you have a great Saturday as well.

    Blessings...Portia
Comment from lyenochka
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Thank you for this poem of encouragement, Portia! And I love all the Scripture verses you added in your notes, too. Yes, the Lord is watching over all of us and His healing Presence is near to all.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Helen,

    Thank so much for your review and continued support.

    Lots of love...Portia
Comment from Sally Law
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Love the beautiful picture with your encouraging poem of faith. It is so needed and appreciated. Sending you my best today as always and blessings in Christ,
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
    Sally,

    Thanks so much for your review and comments, blessings my friend.

    Portia
Comment from Cindy Decker
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I love your poem--it portrays a God almighty and loving, who we all need. Very beautiful picture accompanying your poem. The last line is awesome--I wanted to read more. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
    Cindy,

    Thanks so much for your review very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

    Blessings
reply by Cindy Decker on 24-Mar-2020
    You?re Welcome! Stay healthy during these uncertain times. Good luck in the contest .
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Portia,
I appreciate the sentiments in your well-crafted and heartfelt poetic offering.
But if I may suggest a rewording of "God is looking down..."
When I initially read your offering, I thought He was looking down - as in derision.
Perhaps: God is looking upon or God looks upon...
Just a thought.
Hoping I have not offended.

Take Care!
diane

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 Comment Written 24-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020

    Diane

    Thanks so much for your review and suggestion, please know that you can never offend. I really appreciate you suggestion and have made the necessary changes. Thank You!

    Lots of love...Portia
reply by Mrs. KT on 24-Mar-2020
    Oh...smiles all around, Portia!

    Thank you!
    diane