Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a lovely vision you have painted for us! I'm unfamiliar with this form, JL, but love the collection of couplets!! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette
shakes the very --> shake the very
waterfalls mist --> waterfall's mist
mother nature's --> Mother Nature's
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Such a lovely vision you have painted for us! I'm unfamiliar with this form, JL, but love the collection of couplets!! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette
shakes the very --> shake the very
waterfalls mist --> waterfall's mist
mother nature's --> Mother Nature's
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Yvette, as always your extra set of eyes are very welcomed, Thank you again!
Comment from Sally Law
I'm certain there isn't a poetry form you wouldn't attack with full vigor. This is lovely as the gorgeous photo you have chosen for your piece, J.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the poetry challenge,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I'm certain there isn't a poetry form you wouldn't attack with full vigor. This is lovely as the gorgeous photo you have chosen for your piece, J.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the poetry challenge,
Sally xo
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Sally, thank you!
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
Although my nature poems show my preference for free verse, I tried to review this poem with the given restrictions.
The rhyming is perfect. The syllable count varies a bit between 3, 4 and 5
The mono rhymes follow fluently, but there are no stanzas. Maybe, if the start was to be a couplet, followed by regular 2-lines stanzas, it would become a really very good poem. Agreed, not very easy!
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Although my nature poems show my preference for free verse, I tried to review this poem with the given restrictions.
The rhyming is perfect. The syllable count varies a bit between 3, 4 and 5
The mono rhymes follow fluently, but there are no stanzas. Maybe, if the start was to be a couplet, followed by regular 2-lines stanzas, it would become a really very good poem. Agreed, not very easy!
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Marjon, thank you for your honest input! It's not a perfect meter, but then neither Mother Natures rhythm are not always perfect :)
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JLR, thanks for reacting. No we are not perfect. (I maybe least of all)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is so well written I was seeing, hearing, or feeling every line! Nature is one of my favorite displays of God's handiwork. It declares the glory of God Himself. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is so well written I was seeing, hearing, or feeling every line! Nature is one of my favorite displays of God's handiwork. It declares the glory of God Himself. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Rebecca,
Comment from Puzzle
I really enjoyed this poem. It really painted a picture in my mind of you on a nature walk. Also, I also really enjoyed the picture that you chose. I felt that it went well with your piece.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I really enjoyed this poem. It really painted a picture in my mind of you on a nature walk. Also, I also really enjoyed the picture that you chose. I felt that it went well with your piece.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Puzzle, I am so very grateful for your validating comments. Yes, God is such a masterful creative Genius in every possible aspect of thought. So needed right now!
Comment from Bichon
Great job with this one! You have covered all of the stormy surroundings excellently. From nature, animals and a personal insight, the reader gets a great idea of it all.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Great job with this one! You have covered all of the stormy surroundings excellently. From nature, animals and a personal insight, the reader gets a great idea of it all.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Bichon, I am so very grateful for your validating comments. Yes, God is such a masterful creative Genius in every possible aspect of thought. So needed right now!
