Discovery
A view into the unseen.36 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning free verse write, deserving of an 'Exceptional' rating, but unfortunately I have no Six Stars at this time, so they must be virtual for this outstanding poem - lytically fluid in its narrative. Best wishes in the contest...
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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In my opinion, a stunning free verse write, deserving of an 'Exceptional' rating, but unfortunately I have no Six Stars at this time, so they must be virtual for this outstanding poem - lytically fluid in its narrative. Best wishes in the contest...
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your inspirational review.
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You are very welcome indeed...Eve
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, this is really a poem that tries to keep a positive note. It gives us hope and that's what we need in these dark days that is now getting a grip on the world. Good luck. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Hi there, this is really a poem that tries to keep a positive note. It gives us hope and that's what we need in these dark days that is now getting a grip on the world. Good luck. Ulla:))
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading my work and for your good wishes.
Comment from LisaMay
I was drawn to your poem because the graphic looked like a NZ fern leaf, and was delighted by your words... lovely imagery from nature putting emotions and thoughts in quite an abstract manner yet filled with meaning: "anointing of the unseen".
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I was drawn to your poem because the graphic looked like a NZ fern leaf, and was delighted by your words... lovely imagery from nature putting emotions and thoughts in quite an abstract manner yet filled with meaning: "anointing of the unseen".
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart, Lisa May. You caught those lines so well. You are a poet.
Comment from royowen
I've felt this anointing, in fact this world is miraculous, and one thinks to oneself that how are the chances of this wonderful creation be an act of accidental proportions, a perfect world that has an inbuilt defence mechanism that man is determined to batter down. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I've felt this anointing, in fact this world is miraculous, and one thinks to oneself that how are the chances of this wonderful creation be an act of accidental proportions, a perfect world that has an inbuilt defence mechanism that man is determined to batter down. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Roy, your words are a balm. Bless your understanding and your heart.
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Bless you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about hope in the things we can and sometimes cannot see that is possible through the faith and trust we have in God that all never let us feel fearful.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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A very well-written poem about hope in the things we can and sometimes cannot see that is possible through the faith and trust we have in God that all never let us feel fearful.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Sandra, faithful reviewer.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Discovery
Hello my friend
Fine entry for the Hope poem contest. Simple presentation. The meaning is not clear...at least for me. Good job overall.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Discovery
Hello my friend
Fine entry for the Hope poem contest. Simple presentation. The meaning is not clear...at least for me. Good job overall.
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you dear friend Gypsy.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. Your words were powerful and on point. This is what I call a food for thought poem
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a prefect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. Your words were powerful and on point. This is what I call a food for thought poem
thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review, Cookie.
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t was my pleasure
cookie
Comment from BethShelby
This is an interesting free verse poem that takes a artist who loves life down a path of hopelessness but is able to find in nature some that brings back that spark of hope that makes likfe worthwhile again. Nice entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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This is an interesting free verse poem that takes a artist who loves life down a path of hopelessness but is able to find in nature some that brings back that spark of hope that makes likfe worthwhile again. Nice entry for the contest.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you Beth for your readomg ,u wprk.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your poem is profound. The metaphors and great imagery enhance the artful words. What a wonderful discovery here. Your presentation is stellar. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Your poem is profound. The metaphors and great imagery enhance the artful words. What a wonderful discovery here. Your presentation is stellar. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reading and for feeling my words, Rafaelina.
Comment from June Sargent
We look for the virus to protect ourselves from it. But we can't see it. We begun to lose hope. But if we really look with the eyes of our heart, we will see signs of hope. But more importantly, we will feel it. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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We look for the virus to protect ourselves from it. But we can't see it. We begun to lose hope. But if we really look with the eyes of our heart, we will see signs of hope. But more importantly, we will feel it. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Thank you for understanding my words. It's truly a gift for me, dear writer.
