Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "Shower Power"A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from Ricky1024
"Shower Power"
(A rhyming contest entry)
as I reviewed this it made me think a little bit about a problem I had after a hernia operation where I had additional infections minor lesions on the outside of my skin they followed the scar right up and made three pitted marks which still remain along with a deep red zig zag scar from my navel that was removed up to the almost top point of my chest.
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky1024
"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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"Shower Power"
(A rhyming contest entry)
as I reviewed this it made me think a little bit about a problem I had after a hernia operation where I had additional infections minor lesions on the outside of my skin they followed the scar right up and made three pitted marks which still remain along with a deep red zig zag scar from my navel that was removed up to the almost top point of my chest.
...
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky1024
"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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Hey Bro Ricky, thanks so much for your lovely comprehensive review. Hope you will vote when the contest closes.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I am so happy you finally got the shower you have been dreaming about for too many months. I have been in that situation for only ten days, and the desire to shower was very great. It's hard to fathom MONTHS!
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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I am so happy you finally got the shower you have been dreaming about for too many months. I have been in that situation for only ten days, and the desire to shower was very great. It's hard to fathom MONTHS!
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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It sure was mate. I was never a oftentimes shower person. In the days when she could independently my wife showered everyday which I did not. I know we pick on the English or bathing only once a week, hehe. Thanks for being first cab off the rank as we say, with your lovely review. Hope you will vote when the contest closes.
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I intend to! You read my mind. Ha ha
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I keep forgetting you are a lady hehe.
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No worries.