Hell's Bells
Who do you serve?30 total reviews
Comment from fm wright
A wonderful piece of fiction and that it's interwoven with reality makes it all the more a horror story. A great entry for the flash fiction contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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A wonderful piece of fiction and that it's interwoven with reality makes it all the more a horror story. A great entry for the flash fiction contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Dear Faye, you are so kind and generous. Thank you. I wasn't sure how this would do in a contest, but needed to speak up on behalf of life. Sending you my best with many thanks,
Sal xoxoxo
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Apologies for being late in replying but I was fighting a migraine all last week. Hope all is going well with you and your writing.
XOXO
Faye
Comment from Louise Michelle
Oh, wow, this is a good one, Sally. I loved the originality of your angle. Beelzebub is a great name - something/someone to think of when we're cursing the state of the world. I agree that now is not the time to be political. Let's all get healthy and then we can go back to fighting. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Oh, wow, this is a good one, Sally. I loved the originality of your angle. Beelzebub is a great name - something/someone to think of when we're cursing the state of the world. I agree that now is not the time to be political. Let's all get healthy and then we can go back to fighting. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Agreed. It's like parent's fighting while their children are dying. We all need our faith, sanity and energy to apply ourselves. This type of shenanigans makes the devil laugh in delight. Hope you are well, my dear Lou. I send this back with prayers and encouragement to you and yours,
Sal xoxo
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I was appalled that Pelosi used this crisis to push through her liberal agenda. How low can one get? I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the very best luck.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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I was appalled that Pelosi used this crisis to push through her liberal agenda. How low can one get? I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the very best luck.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Thank you, dear Barbara. I finally found the link to document the move by Nancy Pelosi. She said yesterday not to worry, there will be other bills! I'm ill, I think, after reading that. It's real clear who some of these folks serve.
So glad I know you and have you in my fan base here on FanStory. :))
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal. What an awesome story. You made cogent points. The point about what the Dems are doing about abortion is excellent. They are including sections to make murdering babies easier while feigning their concern about the virus. I've been thinking about posting my Short Story Danny which is about abortion. I wrote it a few years ago.
Dylan wrote the song while he was in his "Christian period." I think he has moved on. The song is so accurate.
Pal Z (*_*)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hello Sal. What an awesome story. You made cogent points. The point about what the Dems are doing about abortion is excellent. They are including sections to make murdering babies easier while feigning their concern about the virus. I've been thinking about posting my Short Story Danny which is about abortion. I wrote it a few years ago.
Dylan wrote the song while he was in his "Christian period." I think he has moved on. The song is so accurate.
Pal Z (*_*)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Dear Z, thank you. It's so wonderful to have brothers and sisters in Christ and even my Jewish friends, and all those who esteem life stand with me today. It really is the devil's agenda to kill and he never ever lets up. The Bible says let us continue In love and good works until the Lord comes. It is never more neededthan today. I'm so glad you like this, and I am hopeful for the contest.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal your pal
PS~ Thanks for the six stars, too.
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Hi Sal. You are so welcome.
Your Pal Z (*_*)
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is a good look at the facts! Whom do you serve!
I liked how you presented this is a meeting type of setting and the intentions of Beelzebub at the end. I would not care to receive his reward.
Excellent writing.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This is a good look at the facts! Whom do you serve!
I liked how you presented this is a meeting type of setting and the intentions of Beelzebub at the end. I would not care to receive his reward.
Excellent writing.
Drew xx
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Good for you. I knew you were a wise one. I really appreciate the wonderful review and insightful comments, dear Drew. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your flash fiction piece is very well-written--and chilling. It's also realistic; the Devil and his minions ARE rejoicing. Yes, it's wickedly ironic that during a time of widespread death, more death--government sanctioned--is being tossed into the mix!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Your flash fiction piece is very well-written--and chilling. It's also realistic; the Devil and his minions ARE rejoicing. Yes, it's wickedly ironic that during a time of widespread death, more death--government sanctioned--is being tossed into the mix!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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It is marked horror although a bit of humor added. Demons are stupid because their end is sure. Humans are even worse because we get on board with them. Scary isn't it? Thanks for chiming in, my dear. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very timely cutting edge flash fiction. I'm sure Beelzebub is very pleased with the way things are going down here on earth. Any unaware human that can be enlisted to help carry out his work would be welcomed. Thankfully we know his days are numbered and he won't win in the end.
Nice entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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This is a very timely cutting edge flash fiction. I'm sure Beelzebub is very pleased with the way things are going down here on earth. Any unaware human that can be enlisted to help carry out his work would be welcomed. Thankfully we know his days are numbered and he won't win in the end.
Nice entry for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Cutting edge, this is. Thank you, Beth dear. I appreciate the review and for standing with me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from Shirley McLain
I like your Flash Fiction. It is well written and I did not see any errors to make suggestions about. I'm sure the devil's minions are cheering over this virus. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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I like your Flash Fiction. It is well written and I did not see any errors to make suggestions about. I'm sure the devil's minions are cheering over this virus. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Thank you, Shirley dear. I'm glad you could see the spiritual side of this one. Many don't. Your kind words are always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Such an interesting time to be alive, Sally!
I read of the slipping of the abortion legislation into the pandemic relief bill. But it appeared to me that the media summarily shut down the reporting of that action. Surprise! Surprise!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Such an interesting time to be alive, Sally!
I read of the slipping of the abortion legislation into the pandemic relief bill. But it appeared to me that the media summarily shut down the reporting of that action. Surprise! Surprise!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2020
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Interesting, indeed. I had to really hunt to still come that link about the abortion bill being slipped into the pandemic aid relief. The media is complicit in their actions many times. It's quite scary. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, yeah -- don't think there's his hand in all this nonsense!! :( ;( A great Flash offering, Lady Sal - thanx for sharing and good luck!! ;) :) Yvette
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Oh, yeah -- don't think there's his hand in all this nonsense!! :( ;( A great Flash offering, Lady Sal - thanx for sharing and good luck!! ;) :) Yvette
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2020
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and encouraging critique. Oops. I type faster than my blind keyboard allows , I think. I get all kinds of crazy stuff. Speaking of crazy, it has become even crazier since I wrote this. Hell is probably taking bets. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
