Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "The Shadow of Ol' Glory"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from StellaAnastasia
This was great! I love that you guys write from both your points of view. I also know that kidney stones are terrible so I felt that. It was beautifully written and makes me want to start my own novel.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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This was great! I love that you guys write from both your points of view. I also know that kidney stones are terrible so I felt that. It was beautifully written and makes me want to start my own novel.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2020
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Hi Stella! HURRAH! So glad you found this chapter great, and you love how we write from both points of view. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. It means a lot to us! Chapter 24 is written and coming soon, so stayed tuned. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from BethShelby
I'm enjoying this cute story. There is always something new going on and I guess you like to leave us with cliff hangers. Nice cast of character and dialogue.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I'm enjoying this cute story. There is always something new going on and I guess you like to leave us with cliff hangers. Nice cast of character and dialogue.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Hi Beth! So glad you are enjoying this story and like the cast of characters and dialogue. Yes, we do leave cliff hangers in several chapters. The book is in three parts, so it may get more intense in a different way when Bill is in Vietnam. Stay tuned. Chapter 24 is written and will be posted soon. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
I like the unique style and formatting in which you write your stories. The vocabulary is quite different and makes for a fun read. Glad go to see the baby is ok so far and the thought its father had about leaving and never coming back to his family again would be quite natural at this point one could say!
Also, grandma and grandpa have a fun relationship! Kept cracking me up haha!
Best wishes for the coming chapters! :-)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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I like the unique style and formatting in which you write your stories. The vocabulary is quite different and makes for a fun read. Glad go to see the baby is ok so far and the thought its father had about leaving and never coming back to his family again would be quite natural at this point one could say!
Also, grandma and grandpa have a fun relationship! Kept cracking me up haha!
Best wishes for the coming chapters! :-)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Greetings, Aaqib! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your detailed review, continued support, and best wishes. Great comments! We are so happy Grandpa and Grandma make you laugh. :) Chapter 24 has been written and is coming soon. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Oh, my! To have kidney stones while pregnant could not have been fun at all for Cathy. The prescribed treatment sounds like it should have worked. I love this line: "I pray to God . . . that your training was better than that of the Viet Cong!"
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Oh, my! To have kidney stones while pregnant could not have been fun at all for Cathy. The prescribed treatment sounds like it should have worked. I love this line: "I pray to God . . . that your training was better than that of the Viet Cong!"
Comment Written 05-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Greetings, CrystieCookie! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for pointing out the line you love. As many know, kidney stones are painful! Yikes! Chapter 24 is written and coming soon. Wishing you good health and happiness. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Family is the word of the day. Thanks, God Cathy and the baby are ok. New event in the family Billy's graduation and lives go on. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Family is the word of the day. Thanks, God Cathy and the baby are ok. New event in the family Billy's graduation and lives go on. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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Hi Iza! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for the good luck and continued support. We are all glad Cathy and the baby are okay. Hooray! Chapter 24 has been written and will be posted soon. Wishing you all the best. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Commando
"HURRAH!" You made my day, Co-Author. It's "AWESOME!" Best Chapter yet. Now c'mon, and let's write Chapter 24. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration and Truckloads of Love, Bill
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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"HURRAH!" You made my day, Co-Author. It's "AWESOME!" Best Chapter yet. Now c'mon, and let's write Chapter 24. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration and Truckloads of Love, Bill
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2020
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HURRAH! Greetings, Co-Author! Thank you for giving us 6 shiny stars! You do know that you are AWESOME, and this story is GREAT because of YOU! Thank you for all you do! It is such an honor to be writing with you--you mean the world to me! Wishing you good health, happiness and love always. Also, wishing the two of us many more years of writing together. We make a great team, don't 'cha think? God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration and Truckloads of Love,
Cathy
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Are you looking, Co-Author? A "SALUTE!" In 3 words . . ."YOU ARE AWESOME!" Respectfully with Admiration and Ton's of Love,
Bill