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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Everything has worked out well for everyone but Charles. I'm glad 'The Lion' will suffer at the hands of the police, especially after all the cruelty he has dished out. But what of Helen? Will she ever return to the woman she was? Will she ever go back to Charles or will he be a terrible reminder of the days she would rather forget? I can't wait to read how you handle this. Well done, my friend, this was make a brilliant film. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Everything has worked out well for everyone but Charles. I'm glad 'The Lion' will suffer at the hands of the police, especially after all the cruelty he has dished out. But what of Helen? Will she ever return to the woman she was? Will she ever go back to Charles or will he be a terrible reminder of the days she would rather forget? I can't wait to read how you handle this. Well done, my friend, this was make a brilliant film. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Sandra. Lovely comments and six stars! Life?s good!
It would be a big budget film - France, England, Pakistan, Thailand and a cast of characters as long as your arm! They?d need a big bin for the bits that hit the cutting room floor! LOL
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It has been done, so, get this out there and see what happens. xx
Comment from Sankey
A real bonus having two of your chapters to read tonight. Great work and lots of emotion, including some rather brave expressions. Thanks again and I have to get on with my next Ramble.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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A real bonus having two of your chapters to read tonight. Great work and lots of emotion, including some rather brave expressions. Thanks again and I have to get on with my next Ramble.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks very much, Geoffrey. Very kind of you to bestow two sixers this week. Much appreciated. All good wishes, Tony
Comment from royowen
It seems a little rough on Charles to seemingly be snubbed by Helen, but who knows what she suffered at the hands of the Lion, but then then you would already know what's going to happen, It looks like Bisto's heading home, I wonder if Charles is going with them, well done Tony, blessings, Roy
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It seems a little rough on Charles to seemingly be snubbed by Helen, but who knows what she suffered at the hands of the Lion, but then then you would already know what's going to happen, It looks like Bisto's heading home, I wonder if Charles is going with them, well done Tony, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Roy. I have a good idea of the general shape of the ending now. Just need to get it down on paper! All the best, Tony.
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Well done
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
This chapter was much to my liking and the narrative you followed here was really good! I wanted more of this in the pervious chapter as well but you have made up for that easily! I love how after the climax, they are now just sitting together having lunch and making plans for the future! That restores some much needed normalcy to the situation! Best wishes for the next one! :-)
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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This chapter was much to my liking and the narrative you followed here was really good! I wanted more of this in the pervious chapter as well but you have made up for that easily! I love how after the climax, they are now just sitting together having lunch and making plans for the future! That restores some much needed normalcy to the situation! Best wishes for the next one! :-)
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks for these supportive comments, Aaqib. As I said before, I shall probably make a few changes to the previous post. I'm glad this one worked better for you. Best wishes, Tony
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You are most welcome! Good luck :-)