Eternity's Embrace
Accept it, my child, and spread your wings...67 total reviews
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well-written poem for the fifteen syllable poem contest. You have offered a unique yet true aspect of forgiveness. It sure does give you strength.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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This is a well-written poem for the fifteen syllable poem contest. You have offered a unique yet true aspect of forgiveness. It sure does give you strength.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Dancemom, for your review here... forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Wonderful Wednesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
In so few words you have summed up forgiveness, with the strength it can supply, the courage to continue it allows, the vision to improve, and that mistakes are not our end, not much more to say-"exceptional" best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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In so few words you have summed up forgiveness, with the strength it can supply, the courage to continue it allows, the vision to improve, and that mistakes are not our end, not much more to say-"exceptional" best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU, sir, for your review and those wonderful stars... forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Wonderful Wednesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
You know Yvette when I first started reading you you was writing stories, once in a while a poem. Your stories are fantastic your poetry was okay. Now your stories and poetry are great! :) You have spread your wings and have become one of the best I have ever read. This is a sure winner. :) Thank you for sharing.
Jose
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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You know Yvette when I first started reading you you was writing stories, once in a while a poem. Your stories are fantastic your poetry was okay. Now your stories and poetry are great! :) You have spread your wings and have become one of the best I have ever read. This is a sure winner. :) Thank you for sharing.
Jose
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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And you have just made my entire week and probably month, Jose!! Thank you, THANK YOU, my friend, for these wonderful stars, but, more than those, for your bright, sunshiny, encouraging comments!! :) Here's sending you sunshine and smiles to hold you through the weekend! :) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello
Nice job with your short poem. Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is very pretty.
I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Hello
Nice job with your short poem. Good job with the syllable count. The presentation is very pretty.
I wish you a lot of luck in the contest.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review, Gypsy! ;) Yvette
Comment from juliaSjames
A thought provoking write, Yvette. Almost oriental in its cryptic wisdom, Confucius says...
An alliterative title and absolutely stunning artwork complete the package.
I believe this one's going places. Good luck.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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A thought provoking write, Yvette. Almost oriental in its cryptic wisdom, Confucius says...
An alliterative title and absolutely stunning artwork complete the package.
I believe this one's going places. Good luck.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your encouraging review, my friend!! :) Take care over there!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bichon
This was a very beautiful poem, my friend! I love the thought of using the wings to soar in the sky, rather than using them as a shield. Very nicely done! X
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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This was a very beautiful poem, my friend! I love the thought of using the wings to soar in the sky, rather than using them as a shield. Very nicely done! X
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Beautiful! ;) Have a terrific Tuesday! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic
and imagery.
-The personification
is effective, as well as
repetition of the 's' sound.
-I like the positive message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic
and imagery.
-The personification
is effective, as well as
repetition of the 's' sound.
-I like the positive message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Pam, for your review this morning -- always so wonderful to hear from you and enjoy that bright orange sunshine your pic delivers! :) Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette. I thought it was a blind contest so I didn't put your name on it. You have a great day, too! It has been raining here for a couple of days with temperatures in the 40's and 50's.
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Here, too, Pam... supposed to continue through Thursday some time...then the temps will plummet into the 20's again! Like they always say: Gotta love the South, if you don't like the weather one day just hang around... it'll be different tomorrow - LOL!! ;) Stay warm and dry! ;)
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I used to follow the weather all the time, and as I get older, I lose track so I just focus on the day and what I need to wear-for a cold day, a warm day, or if we lose electric, which also happened in the last two weeks:)
Comment from June Sargent
The beauty of these words is that the freedom to soar applies both to the one forgiving and the one being forgiven. Without dead weight we can fly to the moon and back!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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The beauty of these words is that the freedom to soar applies both to the one forgiving and the one being forgiven. Without dead weight we can fly to the moon and back!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Welcome back, my lady!! ;) Hope you're feeling alright out there!! ;) And thanx so much for dropping by here - you are so right!! ;) :) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday & welcome back (again!)!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Dutchie
Wonderful 15 sylable poem, Yvette. Some people find it difficult and arre too proud to forgive. They carry it a lifetime with them sometimes. So just forgive and feel free. Nobody is perfect. Wonderful presentation. Love it!!
Fia
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Wonderful 15 sylable poem, Yvette. Some people find it difficult and arre too proud to forgive. They carry it a lifetime with them sometimes. So just forgive and feel free. Nobody is perfect. Wonderful presentation. Love it!!
Fia
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Fia, for dropping in here, and you are so right!! ;) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Patty Palmer
I like your poem! I like how it feels thinking of forgiveness not shelter but the freedom to fly. When we are in a great mood, our souls want to soar deep and wide. But if we feel sad, like not forgiven for something we've done, then I wouldn't want to go out flying free. I hope that makes sense!
Luv!
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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I like your poem! I like how it feels thinking of forgiveness not shelter but the freedom to fly. When we are in a great mood, our souls want to soar deep and wide. But if we feel sad, like not forgiven for something we've done, then I wouldn't want to go out flying free. I hope that makes sense!
Luv!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Oh, you are so right, Patty!! ;) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette