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A Wartime Romance

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Comment from Lu Saluna
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This is a very well written chapter. The writing is quite descriptive and the characters believable. You get the sense that Grandma and Grandpa have been married for forever. I like the open honesty they have.
I am jumping in here in the middle but I intend to start reading from the beginning to catch up.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
    Hi Lu! So glad you enjoyed this chapter and found it well written. HURRAH! Thanks so much for stopping by to read and review it. We are thrilled that you are planning to read our novel from the beginning and follow along. We have 20 chapters currently posted, and Chapter 21 is already written and will be posted soon. Thanks also for pointing out the relationship between Grandma and Grandpa! Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
    Respectfully with Admiration,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from Teri7
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This is another very well written chapter from you two. I always feel as if I am right there in the middle with you. You used very good dialogue and words. Until next time! Blessings, teri

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Hi Teri! Your continued support means so much to us! Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're happy you found it well written and it feels like you are right there with us. Hope you didn't get on that train, though! Yikes! Chapter 21 has already been written and will be posted soon. Stay tuned! Wishing you a wonderful Sunday. God Bless.
    Respectfully with Admiration,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from Ricky1024
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Moonshine and Muscadine Wine'
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020
    Hi Doctor Ricky! Have we told you how much we appreciate you following along? You "betcha" we do!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support. Chapter 21 has already been written and will be posted soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
    Respectfully with Admiration,
    Bill & Cathy
reply by Ricky1024 on 02-Feb-2020
    My pleasure Cathy!
    RIcky