The Problem with Grief
Free verse21 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Hello, Carol! Welcome back!
This is a stunning free verse and you created some poignant phrases that show us the suffocating feel of grief. My favorite part was:
"and the whispered shred of prayer
is a false attempt."
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Hello, Carol! Welcome back!
This is a stunning free verse and you created some poignant phrases that show us the suffocating feel of grief. My favorite part was:
"and the whispered shred of prayer
is a false attempt."
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your comments!
Carol
