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2-3-2 poetry28 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
So true. What the mind knows and what the heart feels can be worlds apart. That's when we decide whether we're inspired to write prose or poetry. Neither is right or wrong- just different perspectives.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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So true. What the mind knows and what the heart feels can be worlds apart. That's when we decide whether we're inspired to write prose or poetry. Neither is right or wrong- just different perspectives.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you June.
Comment from Janilou
Yes, they do indeed and this photograph coupled with these beautiful words took my breath away. That is an amazing photo. So precious and such a perfect background setting to your simple, yet profound poem.
Lovely. No errors noted. No edits needed.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Yes, they do indeed and this photograph coupled with these beautiful words took my breath away. That is an amazing photo. So precious and such a perfect background setting to your simple, yet profound poem.
Lovely. No errors noted. No edits needed.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you Jan.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Author, I just wanted to thank you for writing this wonderful poem. I am sure that all of us who write poetry will want to say the same. Thank you! Thank you!
Keep writing and Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Dear Author, I just wanted to thank you for writing this wonderful poem. I am sure that all of us who write poetry will want to say the same. Thank you! Thank you!
Keep writing and Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Oh, Suzanna, you have made my day!! Thanks so much!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the picture that goes along with this piece. It just speaks so much more with the words. Words are tools of a poet and with those words they can speak the truth.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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I love the picture that goes along with this piece. It just speaks so much more with the words. Words are tools of a poet and with those words they can speak the truth.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Sally Law
What a beautiful short verse poem and the picture supports every word. Poets are the deep ones.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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What a beautiful short verse poem and the picture supports every word. Poets are the deep ones.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much Sally!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
I like that you state that Poets listen with their hearts.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
I like that you state that Poets listen with their hearts.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you Sharon.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Your poem makes a profound statement. Poetry takes writing to another level, and engages both writer and reader more deeply, as a general rule, than prose. The poet generally says more with fewer words, and this is one of the shortest poems I've ever read. The image is perfect, as the child, like the poet, reaches out with one hand, and has his hand to his own heart, with the other.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Your poem makes a profound statement. Poetry takes writing to another level, and engages both writer and reader more deeply, as a general rule, than prose. The poet generally says more with fewer words, and this is one of the shortest poems I've ever read. The image is perfect, as the child, like the poet, reaches out with one hand, and has his hand to his own heart, with the other.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you so very much!! I am thrilled you liked it.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 2-3-2 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and an awesome picture to go with your words. Great job. Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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This is a very well written 2-3-2 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and an awesome picture to go with your words. Great job. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thanks so much!!
