White-Out
Best time to stay home is during white-outs34 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Here in New England we get these a lot. And the wise thing to do is to stay inside with a cup of hot chocolate and write some poetry! Or, watch the latest episode of your favorite series...
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Here in New England we get these a lot. And the wise thing to do is to stay inside with a cup of hot chocolate and write some poetry! Or, watch the latest episode of your favorite series...
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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June, I grew up in the mountain region of Eastern Washington State and it was deathly to drive under white-out conditions.
Comment from Sugarray77
I think your choice in artwork is perfect and really enhances your short verse. Good job on your choice of theme and presentation. i wish you luck!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I think your choice in artwork is perfect and really enhances your short verse. Good job on your choice of theme and presentation. i wish you luck!!
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Melissa, thank you, I was, thinking on Christmas, about white-outs as one of our children didn't make it home for Christmas due to white-outs!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, eccentric and creative. I pondered
on the theme of this poem. I am still thinking about it! The words
flow and connect well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem. Happy Holidays!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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The author's words are interesting, eccentric and creative. I pondered
on the theme of this poem. I am still thinking about it! The words
flow and connect well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem. Happy Holidays!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of the danger of winter driving.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of the danger of winter driving.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Sharon, thank you, I was, thinking on Christmas, about white-outs as one of our children didn't make it home for Christmas due to white-outs!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"White Outs", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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"White Outs", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you@
Comment from RShipp
I hate driving in the snows.
As soon as the forecast speaks of flakes, I check the refrigerator for my favorites for the next week- snowflakes do have the tendency to pile up.
Well done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I hate driving in the snows.
As soon as the forecast speaks of flakes, I check the refrigerator for my favorites for the next week- snowflakes do have the tendency to pile up.
Well done. Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Good plan!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, so difficult to write such a brief poem that is both compliant with the prompt and offers a striking message. You have accomplished both in this succinct and boldly dramatic write and image. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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In my opinion, so difficult to write such a brief poem that is both compliant with the prompt and offers a striking message. You have accomplished both in this succinct and boldly dramatic write and image. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Eve, thank you, I was, thinking on Christmas, about white-outs as one of our children didn't make it home for Christmas due to white-outs!
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You are very welcome, my pleasure I assure you, but with regret for the one who didn't make it home...Eve
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Your message was very clear in only a few words. I enjoyed reading it very much. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Your message was very clear in only a few words. I enjoyed reading it very much. Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Ogden
Thanks for warning us that white-outs cause dagerous driving conditions, but everybody knows that, so you wasted all those member bucks you spent to bribe voters. ;o)
Good luck, anyway, and enjoy what's lleft of Christmas!
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thanks for warning us that white-outs cause dagerous driving conditions, but everybody knows that, so you wasted all those member bucks you spent to bribe voters. ;o)
Good luck, anyway, and enjoy what's lleft of Christmas!
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Hey Don, yeah, I was letting out frustration on Christmas, about white-outs, as one of our children didn't make it home for Christmas due to white-outs!
Comment from Therese Caron
You better believe white-outs are risky! I live in upstate New York, 27 miles from the Canadian border. White outs are a common thing here.This little poem, allowed only a few syllables, still makes it a point loud and clear. The picture is perfect because when you look at it all you can see is white, which is exactly what a white out looks like. They are frightening because you could be driving along and it's perfectly clear and suddenly you're in the middle of a white out. It's hard to know if you're even still on the road. That's why this picture is such a great example. Great poem, great illustration, good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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You better believe white-outs are risky! I live in upstate New York, 27 miles from the Canadian border. White outs are a common thing here.This little poem, allowed only a few syllables, still makes it a point loud and clear. The picture is perfect because when you look at it all you can see is white, which is exactly what a white out looks like. They are frightening because you could be driving along and it's perfectly clear and suddenly you're in the middle of a white out. It's hard to know if you're even still on the road. That's why this picture is such a great example. Great poem, great illustration, good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Therese --yes I have been in Buffalo in a blow and it is daunting to say the least.
