To My Secret Admirer Finale
Kristin and Will31 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi sally this is a wonderful finale to the story. It makes you want that it could always be like that most of the time in real life.
I found a couple of things.
They couple also knew that in real life things don't always go according to plan. = The couple also knew that ...
which is killer, by the way,"= which is a killer, by the way."
Merry Christmas to you and yours. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Hi sally this is a wonderful finale to the story. It makes you want that it could always be like that most of the time in real life.
I found a couple of things.
They couple also knew that in real life things don't always go according to plan. = The couple also knew that ...
which is killer, by the way,"= which is a killer, by the way."
Merry Christmas to you and yours. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for the marvelous review and six star shower, Ulla dear. I appreciate the critiques and improvements, too. I hope you have a wonderful holiday, and blessings to you and yours,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Barbaraj1
This is a lovely and sentimental story. I enjoyed reading it. These two
people, Will and Kristin, were really meant for each other. Thank you
for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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This is a lovely and sentimental story. I enjoyed reading it. These two
people, Will and Kristin, were really meant for each other. Thank you
for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thank you, dear Barbara. I'm glad you enjoyed these to the end. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from royowen
You are such a sentimental dear Sally, a romantic, and an unrepentant one my friend. Elaine and I are spending our Christmas time with dearest elder daughter, son in law, and dear grandsons for the first time since New York, 2010. Although they've been at our home with our younger daughter SIL and grands, (we miss them) but music everywhere, my daughter is a brilliant singer/musician, as is Nick, who is a pianist, and Zac, a budding singer, merry Christmas from Australia, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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You are such a sentimental dear Sally, a romantic, and an unrepentant one my friend. Elaine and I are spending our Christmas time with dearest elder daughter, son in law, and dear grandsons for the first time since New York, 2010. Although they've been at our home with our younger daughter SIL and grands, (we miss them) but music everywhere, my daughter is a brilliant singer/musician, as is Nick, who is a pianist, and Zac, a budding singer, merry Christmas from Australia, blessings, Roy
Typo : The(y) couple also knew...
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and kind compliments, Roy. I appreciate it so much.
Merry Christmas to you and yours,
Sally xo
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Bless you
Comment from RShipp
I love your opening quote!
"They couple also knew that in real life..." I think you meant 'the'.
" a grand reception catered by Taco Loco." How very appropriate for them.
A wonderful story.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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I love your opening quote!
"They couple also knew that in real life..." I think you meant 'the'.
" a grand reception catered by Taco Loco." How very appropriate for them.
A wonderful story.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the helpful review and kind critique. It is so appreciated. I am blind and always seem to have something to repair. LOL!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a very touching story, very nicely told.
And the accompanying videos make all the more special.
Well done and thank you for sharing this.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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This is a very touching story, very nicely told.
And the accompanying videos make all the more special.
Well done and thank you for sharing this.
Sharon
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for staying with me in these love letter stories, Sharon. It is always so appreciated.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Sankey
What a lovely romantic read. So the marriage was in the hospital, huh. I know it says Fiction but all looks very real. A few spags for ya. The[y] couple also knew that in real life
"Didn't I say in [my] one of my most recent
an open field on Christmas Eve [Eve],
will be here to [to] spend the
I thin k the last Christmas Eve Eve hehe was not a spag.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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What a lovely romantic read. So the marriage was in the hospital, huh. I know it says Fiction but all looks very real. A few spags for ya. The[y] couple also knew that in real life
"Didn't I say in [my] one of my most recent
an open field on Christmas Eve [Eve],
will be here to [to] spend the
I thin k the last Christmas Eve Eve hehe was not a spag.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for the outstanding review and generous stars. It means the world to me. I have repaired the dogs. Christmas Eve Eve is not a spag. See the Urban dictionary for the definition of the eve before Christmas Eve, also referred to as Christmas Eve Eve. It's a thing now. LOL! Sending you both my best with hugs and blessings for Christmas!!
Sally xoxo :) :)
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I did acknowledge the Eve Eve was not a spag ok. I figured it out eventually.
Comment from Loren .
Love this, Sally. It speaks to a true and abiding love. In fact, it reminds me of the love my wife, Lori, and I share. That way I know that the emotions written here can be and are true. I wonder how many miss out on this for so many other temporal things. God bless and thank you for sharing this celebration of love. Loren
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Love this, Sally. It speaks to a true and abiding love. In fact, it reminds me of the love my wife, Lori, and I share. That way I know that the emotions written here can be and are true. I wonder how many miss out on this for so many other temporal things. God bless and thank you for sharing this celebration of love. Loren
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Thank you, dear Loren. I'm so pleased you liked this. I am truly honored by your kind compliments and shower of stars. It's good to get so much positive feedback from the men on this one. We live in a cynical world were love like this is fading away. I just refused to let it fade away on my FS pages. More like this coming in 2020.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year. Sal :))
Comment from Bill Pinder
Sally, you wrote a great story that is very real and expresses a clear picture of genuine love that is powerful. Thanks for sharing this in a creative way. it is so needed for families to pass on the example of genuine love to the next generation. Looks like you want to remove the first "my" in the sentence about love letters.
Bill
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Sally, you wrote a great story that is very real and expresses a clear picture of genuine love that is powerful. Thanks for sharing this in a creative way. it is so needed for families to pass on the example of genuine love to the next generation. Looks like you want to remove the first "my" in the sentence about love letters.
Bill
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Dear Bill, I am amazed by the response from the men with these love letter stories. The happily married ones are the best! My husband cried when he read this final chapter, more than once.
Your review means so much and I am truly honored by your kind words and six stars. Thank you, again.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the new year,
Sally :))
Comment from Janetsue
This is a truly wonderful series, Sally. I enjoyed reading it so much...and I also loved listening to Andrea Bocelli and the other ambiance enhancers you've provided! Hugs, Janet
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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This is a truly wonderful series, Sally. I enjoyed reading it so much...and I also loved listening to Andrea Bocelli and the other ambiance enhancers you've provided! Hugs, Janet
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Dear Janet, my sweet romantic, how dear you are to me. I am so pleased to see your name and hear how much you enjoyed this final chapter. Your generous shower of stars continue to overwhelm me! Thank you so much!
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year,
Sally xoxo
Comment from fm wright
What a wonderful ending to such a beautifully romantic story. You even handled the sadness so well. A truly remarkable piece of work. The picture touches it off so well. I am sorry it ended, but I did enjoy the ride.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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What a wonderful ending to such a beautifully romantic story. You even handled the sadness so well. A truly remarkable piece of work. The picture touches it off so well. I am sorry it ended, but I did enjoy the ride.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2019
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Thank you, dear Faye. Your continued support and kindest reviews mean the world to me. I'll never grow tired of them. I'm glad you enjoyed the ride with me.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings for the new year,
Sally xoxo
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Blessings to you and yours for the new year.
Faye xoxo