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My Meaning of Life

From Aristotle to Eckart Tolle man is in constant inquiry

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Comment from Patty Palmer
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You're so right! Everyone would probably have a different answer. That's not to say anyone would be wrong. I don't believe that there is anyone real answer. I think the real meaning of life means for each of us what's in our hearts.
Good job!
Patty

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Patty, I agree wholeheartedly in your comment.
Comment from Adelphos Vasa
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I think nature reflects a divine creator, and I love the ending image, it seems like a new beginning with the door, which is very hopeful. Nicely written and worthy of a five star rating, Joy.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Joy, thank you!
Comment from Lobber
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Hi there,
A very poignant poem.. the word legacy leaped out at me... I'm 72 with no heirs...BUT instead, I have given birth to a Foundation...I through my writings will be available to all who wish to read my works. - Lobber

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    LObber, what a great manner of paying it forward..I will be joining the ranks of the 70's brigade in late March.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Yes, we all have a different view of the meaning of life. Your poem articulates your aims through this life and they are all admirable, as is your artful poem. The picture is sterling!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Raffaelina, thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your well-written poem effectively conveys a message about what life consists of. You have made good use of specific details. Lines 3 and 4 say a person might be afraid of loved ones. ??

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Janice, yes I regret in some families there are always situational, often bad habits, that can and do cause parents or a loved one fear about a person's actions or bad habits.
reply by Janice Canerdy on 20-Nov-2019
    Yes, you are right!
Comment from Barbaraj1
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Your poem on the meaning of life is great. The poem flows well
and your rhyming is excellent. The artwork is perfect. I wish you good
luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Thank you!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned rhymed verse within the line count allotted. Where I am a bit confused is that you do a beautiful job describing living, but I don't see how it expresses the actual meaning of these activities. It's probably just my own dense nature LOL. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    My meaning of life...is in the process of being a human, doing these human things. It is in the doing throughout the handful of decades we get to try our hand all of these things and more...
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are clear, straight forward, interesting and creative.
Thank you for the author's notes I like what you had to say. The artwork
is perfect and compliments the theme and words of this poem well.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019
    Thanks!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about the meaning of life for each of us should be to find love and learn how to live with passion each day and to raise a family with great integrity.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    Sandra, thank you. I believe we all strive for these and many more, we just come at life from differing directions.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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I appreciate the points you make in this poem. I especially like the lines, "being open despite some fear/ Of people that might be very dear." Good luck in the competition!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    My thanks to you for your review and comments.
reply by Darlene Franklin on 19-Nov-2019
    You are welcome, Darlene
reply by Darlene Franklin on 20-Nov-2019
    You are very welcome, Darlene