Miscellaneous Poems - vol 3
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Comment from Sugarray77
Ewww Craig!!! Well done on this one. I love this poem and think you did an excellent job interpreting the prompt. Well done on a vivid and imaginative verse. I really enjoyed reading it!!
Melissa
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Ewww Craig!!! Well done on this one. I love this poem and think you did an excellent job interpreting the prompt. Well done on a vivid and imaginative verse. I really enjoyed reading it!!
Melissa
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thanks for the lovely comments, Melissa. I was hoping it was suitably disturbing. Cheers, Craig
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Who cares? Who concerns the grave concerns? Tears fall down; once he left home and fought for nations, now he is in the coffin, none can answer him, why? Well said, well done.
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Who cares? Who concerns the grave concerns? Tears fall down; once he left home and fought for nations, now he is in the coffin, none can answer him, why? Well said, well done.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
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Thanks for reading, and the kind comments. Much appreciated. Craig