Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Hurrah, Commando! - Chapter 15"A Wartime Romance
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I sure hope somebody remained and shot the gator. As having been a military spouse for 23 years, they don't leave a man behind. I'm sure somebody followed protocol. I can't wait for more.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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I sure hope somebody remained and shot the gator. As having been a military spouse for 23 years, they don't leave a man behind. I'm sure somebody followed protocol. I can't wait for more.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hi Barbara! Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME six star rating and review. A double "SALUTE!" Your continued support means so much to us, and we greatly appreciated it! You won't have to wait too long for Chapter 16. It's already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful week. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mistydawn
A lot has happened in this chapter. It was easy to follow along thought the sequence of events. I had to laugh at the part about the moonshine, granny whopping him with her broom. I could picture it in my mind, lol. Why do I have the feeling she's pregnant? I do hope Bill can get out before the crock makes him his dinner. The mention of Johnny Cash brought back a pleasant memory of my daughter and me singing one of his songs, Daddy Sang Bass. I now wonder if it wasn't a sign of what was to become.
The chapter is well-written, interesting, I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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A lot has happened in this chapter. It was easy to follow along thought the sequence of events. I had to laugh at the part about the moonshine, granny whopping him with her broom. I could picture it in my mind, lol. Why do I have the feeling she's pregnant? I do hope Bill can get out before the crock makes him his dinner. The mention of Johnny Cash brought back a pleasant memory of my daughter and me singing one of his songs, Daddy Sang Bass. I now wonder if it wasn't a sign of what was to become.
The chapter is well-written, interesting, I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hi Mistydawn! Your continued support means so much to us! Thank you for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're glad you found it well-written and interesting. You won't have to wait too long for Chapter 16. It's in the works and coming soon. Have a great week! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sally Law
A fine continuation of your love story. I love the way the whole family is involved and rooting them on. War can make a person feel so alone and it's so important to have the support of family. I love and was born in the foothills of the Blie Ridge Moumtains and listened to all the songs you provided. Thank you, a real treat. Who doesn't like Johnny Cash?
A small suggestion. Queasy would be a better adjective than topsy-turvy in relation to an upset stomach.
Sending you both my best as always,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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A fine continuation of your love story. I love the way the whole family is involved and rooting them on. War can make a person feel so alone and it's so important to have the support of family. I love and was born in the foothills of the Blie Ridge Moumtains and listened to all the songs you provided. Thank you, a real treat. Who doesn't like Johnny Cash?
A small suggestion. Queasy would be a better adjective than topsy-turvy in relation to an upset stomach.
Sending you both my best as always,
Sally xo
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Hi Sally! Your comments are awesome! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, thank you for your continued support, as well as your small suggestion. The word has been changed. Chapter 16 is already in the works and coming soon. Wishing you an awesome week! God Bless.
With Respect and Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
his is very well penned and thoroughly engaging end to end. The content flows beautifully and maintains its natural and believable cadence throughout. I think it will be rough for her if she is pregnant, but God handles all things so I am sure in the end all will be fine. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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his is very well penned and thoroughly engaging end to end. The content flows beautifully and maintains its natural and believable cadence throughout. I think it will be rough for her if she is pregnant, but God handles all things so I am sure in the end all will be fine. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Hi Mystic Angel 777! Awesome comments here! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for the continued support. We really like how you pointed out that "God handles all things." Chapter 16 is already in the works and coming soon. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from JanetRussek
Wonderful chapter. It flowed very smoothly; didn't drag, and kept me wanting to read more. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Very nice writing.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Wonderful chapter. It flowed very smoothly; didn't drag, and kept me wanting to read more. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Very nice writing.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Hi Janet! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. So glad you found it wonderful! Your comments are greatly appreciated! We hope you will continue to follow along. Chapter 16 is already in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sabrina David
Oh how I enjoyed this chapter! Grandpa's hidden flask of moonshine brought a sudden smile to my face and many fond memories of childhood. I am not sure whether or not the following needs any changes, but I just noticed that the word "reservation" is subsequently capitalised on line 3 of paragraph 17. Otherwise, you have certainly made me laugh then leave me in a state of uncertainty and wanting more. This chapter reads so well. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Oh how I enjoyed this chapter! Grandpa's hidden flask of moonshine brought a sudden smile to my face and many fond memories of childhood. I am not sure whether or not the following needs any changes, but I just noticed that the word "reservation" is subsequently capitalised on line 3 of paragraph 17. Otherwise, you have certainly made me laugh then leave me in a state of uncertainty and wanting more. This chapter reads so well. Thank you.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Hi Sabrina! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're so glad it brought a smile to your face, along with fond memories. Hurrah! We will check the word "reservation" in the chapter to see if it should be capitalized or not. Thank you for that, too! We hope you will continue to follow along with this story. Chapter 16 is already in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy