Love Letter on a Clipboard #3
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sally. The idea of incorporating a Nonet into a chapter of your book is outstanding. This letter is well written and I like the reference of Kristin being able to handle Captain Lewis. It shows a total picture of the depth of her character aside from the love letters. Well written. Z
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Hello Sally. The idea of incorporating a Nonet into a chapter of your book is outstanding. This letter is well written and I like the reference of Kristin being able to handle Captain Lewis. It shows a total picture of the depth of her character aside from the love letters. Well written. Z
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you, dear Z. Your kind reviews and comments mean so much. Sending you my best as always,
Sally :)
Comment from WryWriter
Ah...you are a romantic at heart! This letter is VERY well-done and reeks in sincerity. Great job on the poem as well. Love the Bible verse at the beginning. Enjoyed reading!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Ah...you are a romantic at heart! This letter is VERY well-done and reeks in sincerity. Great job on the poem as well. Love the Bible verse at the beginning. Enjoyed reading!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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It's so true. My husband is very romantic, even after all our years of marriage. We had a long courtship and wrote piles of letters to each other. I am a pro and have had many letters of my own for inspiration for this story. I'm so glad you are staying with this series. Her replies are inmtje posts called, To My Secret Admirer. These two stories will run in tandem until Christmas Eve Eve.
Sending you my best today with many thanks for your kind review,
Sally xo
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You are such a lucky girl! : )
Comment from Sugarray77
What a lovely Nonet on the Nines. You did a very good job of relating the love and devotion between these two romantic souls. Well done Sally.
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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What a lovely Nonet on the Nines. You did a very good job of relating the love and devotion between these two romantic souls. Well done Sally.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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My poets love the NonetsI have set inside these stories. I'm glad our enjoyed this along with my personal touch.
Sending my best as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Janetsue
You definitely excel at writing the nonet form...and for incorporating it so naturally into the letter portion of your posting. That is very clever and allows the reader to see further into the heart of the poet. xo Janet
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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You definitely excel at writing the nonet form...and for incorporating it so naturally into the letter portion of your posting. That is very clever and allows the reader to see further into the heart of the poet. xo Janet
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Ah, thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story and enclosed Nonet.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Beautiful, Sally, just beautiful. I do get the feeling that Captain Lewis is the secret admirer...
I have never tried writing a nonet; you seem to have great proficiency at it. One day I will try my hand at it.
Thanks for sharing this love letter on a clipboard. Have a super Sunday!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Beautiful, Sally, just beautiful. I do get the feeling that Captain Lewis is the secret admirer...
I have never tried writing a nonet; you seem to have great proficiency at it. One day I will try my hand at it.
Thanks for sharing this love letter on a clipboard. Have a super Sunday!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, dear Sandra. You are just so very kind. I'm so glad you're enjoying these love stories. 'Love Letter on a Clipboard' and 'To My Secret Admirer' will run in tandem until Christmas Eve Eve. Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer. I know you are a busy lady!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
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You are welcome, Sally. I really do enjoy them.
Have a wonderful and fulfilling week!
Comment from Sankey
Loved reading this and it looks like I must have missed a bunch of these. A few spags and suggestions. This regime[delete space before comma or even leave comma out altogether] ,
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Loved reading this and it looks like I must have missed a bunch of these. A few spags and suggestions. This regime[delete space before comma or even leave comma out altogether] ,
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank our very much for the stellar review and six star shower. It means so much and delights me to no end when I see you and Louise's photo looking at me. I have a new keyboard and it's difficult. It's giving me commas, periods and spaces where I do not want them. Thank you for the helpful critique and good eyes. Hopefully, I will get the hang of this new keyboard soon. 'Love Letter on a Clipboard' has three chapters, and 'To My Secret Admirer' has two chapters, and the third one airs next week. I will post it after my newest 'What The Blind Girl Saw' chapter as I nearing the end and moving to publish that as a crime/mystery novella. Thanks again for all your help and support. Sending you both my very best today, and blessings in Christ our Lord,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Liz O'Neill
So you're telling us the mystery man did not write the Nonet? You wrote it? Well, at least one of you fesses up. If he's an artist, I wonder if that will give her more clues to his identity. We'll have to see through her solving the clues. This is fun for the reader. Watching her solve the puzzle draws the reader in more and more.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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So you're telling us the mystery man did not write the Nonet? You wrote it? Well, at least one of you fesses up. If he's an artist, I wonder if that will give her more clues to his identity. We'll have to see through her solving the clues. This is fun for the reader. Watching her solve the puzzle draws the reader in more and more.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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It is a mystery and a love story and I threw a Nonet in for good measure. So glad you like.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Heather Knight
This is beautiful, original and moving, Sally. The character depiction is great and I love all the little details.
You could turn this into a novel!
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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This is beautiful, original and moving, Sally. The character depiction is great and I love all the little details.
You could turn this into a novel!
Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, Maria. What a sweet compliment. I'm delighted you are enjoying these and I am truly enjoying the write.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Sally, this is just so beautiful and I love it. The love and care shines through every word. Your nonet poem is outstanding. How I love to follow this story. Warm regards. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Oh, Sally, this is just so beautiful and I love it. The love and care shines through every word. Your nonet poem is outstanding. How I love to follow this story. Warm regards. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Ah, Im so delighted you enjoy it. Romance is in the air with Lorenzo and with my two characters in What The Blind Girl Saw, Hava and Leo. I love a good old-fashioned romance. Thank you so much for the six stars and kindest compliments. As always, it means so much.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a commentary for numbers 2 and 3 together, as somehow I managed to miss the former until now. These are very moving letters, and it is lovely to see an example of the lost art (handwritten letters) rejuvenated. My only query is whether perhaps emotions are moving too fast. I don't want the romance to run out of steam before its time.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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This is a commentary for numbers 2 and 3 together, as somehow I managed to miss the former until now. These are very moving letters, and it is lovely to see an example of the lost art (handwritten letters) rejuvenated. My only query is whether perhaps emotions are moving too fast. I don't want the romance to run out of steam before its time.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Ah, it's going full steam until Cjristmas Eve Eve. I'm so pleased you're enjoying this and I thank you for the kind review.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo