Sammy the Snail
A Limerick love story.25 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent read. I was very surprised, as I often find limericks trite, but despite being classed as a love story and falling clearly into that category, this was also humerous.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
This is an excellent read. I was very surprised, as I often find limericks trite, but despite being classed as a love story and falling clearly into that category, this was also humerous.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments. I love this type of poem and guarantees a smile.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Susan X Smith
I love limericks and this one was quite humorous. The picture you selected to complement the piece was a great addition. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
I love limericks and this one was quite humorous. The picture you selected to complement the piece was a great addition. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Limericks are so fun and this one had been in edit for awhile. I thought I'd post it for a round of good cheer. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Sending you my best today with many thanks,
Sally :)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Sally. That's a funny poem. The name made me laugh to start with. I like limericks a lot and appreciate a good one. This one had excellent rhyme and meter. Sammy ended up with a hammy she-snail. I hope they are happy. He certainly looks happy in the picture with his pink shell. Best to you this week. Z
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
Hey Sally. That's a funny poem. The name made me laugh to start with. I like limericks a lot and appreciate a good one. This one had excellent rhyme and meter. Sammy ended up with a hammy she-snail. I hope they are happy. He certainly looks happy in the picture with his pink shell. Best to you this week. Z
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind compliments of my silliest poem yet. I've had this in edit for months, and just decided to let loose today. We need a good laugh, don't we? Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))
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See...you now know exactly what I like reading. What does that say about me? I enjoyed it a lot. I hope you're having a good day Sally. Z
Comment from papa55mike
Well, I was looking for a place to put a 6. This poem is wonderfully written and I love the picture of Sammy. We'll be talking. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
Well, I was looking for a place to put a 6. This poem is wonderfully written and I love the picture of Sammy. We'll be talking. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much, dear Papa Mike. I appreciate the wonderful review and six star rating. This is my silliest limerick yet, and so glad you enjoyed it. If I can make anyone smile, my work here is complete. :) :)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from royowen
I had to have a giggle at this great little limerick Sally, cleverly written my friend, the fact of Sammy living in a clammy trailer would be quite natural, but he and Mrs snail could really heat things up! Well done Sally, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
I had to have a giggle at this great little limerick Sally, cleverly written my friend, the fact of Sammy living in a clammy trailer would be quite natural, but he and Mrs snail could really heat things up! Well done Sally, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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You're quite the romantic poet, Mr. Owens. Yes, I didn't think about that, and I guess I should've thought about the body heat sooner, but--too late. I'm glad you enjoyed my silliest poem to date.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)
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Always a fan Sally, yes I am a romantic, my elder and me would watch ?weepies? together when she lived at home, we haven?t changed.