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An aging knight finds a clutch of dragon eggs
21 total reviews
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Sallyo
stiff an aching.
AND
Aaron turned to leave and found his way blocked.
I suggest you say "by a woman" or some such.
This is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter! The characters are fun, the humour is great, and you're giving an older man the heroic role.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
Thanks. I have a couple of things to fix right now so I'll change that too. Yes, it would help to know what blocks his way. Glad you're enjoying the story.
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