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Aaron's Dragons

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An aging knight finds a clutch of dragon eggs

21 total reviews 
Comment from Sallyo
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

stiff an aching.
AND

Aaron turned to leave and found his way blocked.
I suggest you say "by a woman" or some such.
This is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter! The characters are fun, the humour is great, and you're giving an older man the heroic role.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
    Thanks. I have a couple of things to fix right now so I'll change that too. Yes, it would help to know what blocks his way. Glad you're enjoying the story.