Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

The image of the moon beaming and smiling down on the two lovers is enchanting. This loop poem flowed naturally and smoothly. Sometimes loop poetry can feel contrived and awkward...like mine! You've got a winner here!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019

Thanks for your encouraging comments, June. I agree with you about the often contrived feeling in loop poems, so I concentrated in this one to make it feel natural.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation, Lisa.
-A very nice loop poem
with effective rhyme and imagery.
-I like the opening with
"Dreaming moonbeams."
-I also like
"beaming, dazzling, dancing free"
-A very good entry; good luck!

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019

Thanks for your supportive comments, Pam.

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Sep-2019

You are welcome, Lisa.

Comment from beizanten

Excellent

Beautiful eye catching tittle and beautiful picture it suit the poetry. Simple yet detail and sweet opening stanza. a very beautiful and sweet piece of poetry

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 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019

... and thank you very much for your beautiful review!