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Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "St. Louis Chapter 11 part 1"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was lovely, Barbara, I especially loved the ending, lol, why are you still holding her hand!!! LOL. Of course they are a couple, I could see that straight away. It's just a shame they came together due to awful circumstances. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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That was lovely, Barbara, I especially loved the ending, lol, why are you still holding her hand!!! LOL. Of course they are a couple, I could see that straight away. It's just a shame they came together due to awful circumstances. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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I hope the circumstances don't stand in the way of the romance. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Logan and Mac are still going at it. I thought it was funny that Nancy was commenting on what a cute couple they were and Logan says they aren't a couple. Then she asks why are you still holding hands. Great moment. The case has been moving slowly. The autopsy report hasn't been released and Mac is puzzled about Megan's cell phone being missing. A lot of strange elements. Whitney is a possible suspect, depending on what time he was arrested. They also need to check out Megan's apartment. Great story. You've brought in a lot of elements for Megan to explore. judi
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Logan and Mac are still going at it. I thought it was funny that Nancy was commenting on what a cute couple they were and Logan says they aren't a couple. Then she asks why are you still holding hands. Great moment. The case has been moving slowly. The autopsy report hasn't been released and Mac is puzzled about Megan's cell phone being missing. A lot of strange elements. Whitney is a possible suspect, depending on what time he was arrested. They also need to check out Megan's apartment. Great story. You've brought in a lot of elements for Megan to explore. judi
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome. Great chapter! judi
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Waw this is going to be a fascinating mystery -romance story. You caught my attention; now I'm curious to find out who kill Meghan. Good luck with your writing and thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Waw this is going to be a fascinating mystery -romance story. You caught my attention; now I'm curious to find out who kill Meghan. Good luck with your writing and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
