St Louis
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "St. Louis Chapter 10 part 3"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
21 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Still well written narrative that is both compelling and engaging. You do an excellent job of capturing and sustaining your readers attention. The dialogue is believable and the characters continue to be multifaceted and well developed. I did notice a few spelling/word use errors or typos but in my mind they were minor. You may want to correct those. I'm confident that you'll get 6 star ratings if you do. Well done as always. I think sometimes we fall victim to auto correct or we just leave out a small connecting word like "be" because in our mind we typed it. It has definitely happened to me plenty of times. In any event Great Job!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
  |
Still well written narrative that is both compelling and engaging. You do an excellent job of capturing and sustaining your readers attention. The dialogue is believable and the characters continue to be multifaceted and well developed. I did notice a few spelling/word use errors or typos but in my mind they were minor. You may want to correct those. I'm confident that you'll get 6 star ratings if you do. Well done as always. I think sometimes we fall victim to auto correct or we just leave out a small connecting word like "be" because in our mind we typed it. It has definitely happened to me plenty of times. In any event Great Job!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
-
I have made three corrections. I hope that's all there is. Thank you
