St Louis
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Comment from JLR
First and foremost, my sincere hope your son gets immediate and successful medical treatment. This is my first read of your prolific work. It is a pure pleasure to read something so well written, I will just close saying, continue successes, personally and professionally.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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First and foremost, my sincere hope your son gets immediate and successful medical treatment. This is my first read of your prolific work. It is a pure pleasure to read something so well written, I will just close saying, continue successes, personally and professionally.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement and the will wishes.
Comment from Dawn Munro
"...or let him suffer(?)"
"After the men headed outside..." no comma needed after "men"
Once again your chapter was an entertaining read and you've concluded at a spot that leads the reader to want more. Nicely done, Barb.
Off topic, please accept my apologies for lagging behind...!
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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"...or let him suffer(?)"
"After the men headed outside..." no comma needed after "men"
Once again your chapter was an entertaining read and you've concluded at a spot that leads the reader to want more. Nicely done, Barb.
Off topic, please accept my apologies for lagging behind...!
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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I am wondering how that comma got after 'men'. I'm pretty sure gremlins put it there. LOL Thank you for the catches. I appreciate them.
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Those lil' buggers are everywhere! (LOL) You're very welcome, Barbara.
Comment from royowen
The question of Mackenzie loving Logan, is raised, but she cutely sides steps, and says they always argue, as if that is answering the question. What an interesting set of characters from Mack's past. An intriguing set of caretakers, that all care for McKenzie's person and future. We'll dine, Barbara, great episode, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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The question of Mackenzie loving Logan, is raised, but she cutely sides steps, and says they always argue, as if that is answering the question. What an interesting set of characters from Mack's past. An intriguing set of caretakers, that all care for McKenzie's person and future. We'll dine, Barbara, great episode, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome dear Barbara,
