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Comment from Sally Law
I'm not the poetry police, so you're safe with me. Your heart for God to use your words is what shines here. You see your life as a gift and your pen as a vessel for Him, which is admirable. I loved this--perfect to me.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally Law :)
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I'm not the poetry police, so you're safe with me. Your heart for God to use your words is what shines here. You see your life as a gift and your pen as a vessel for Him, which is admirable. I loved this--perfect to me.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally Law :)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
Your words speak volumes to those who read them.
We have is our grasp, everything that is needed. Some with more work than others. It is up to us to decide what is important and what is frivolous. God gives, we receive, we either make more of it or destroy what he gives out.
Thanks for Sharing.
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Your words speak volumes to those who read them.
We have is our grasp, everything that is needed. Some with more work than others. It is up to us to decide what is important and what is frivolous. God gives, we receive, we either make more of it or destroy what he gives out.
Thanks for Sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"God Gives Me Everything!" is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to reading your next post.
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"God Gives Me Everything!" is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to reading your next post.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
Comment from Allieas
This is such an uplifting poem, which is really nice to read during such a dark and uncertain time in the world. Thank you for sharing this light with us. Hope you're well!
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This is such an uplifting poem, which is really nice to read during such a dark and uncertain time in the world. Thank you for sharing this light with us. Hope you're well!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: I notice that you like to write about God. Then, you state this is not religious. We are in Holy Week with both the Christians and Jewish people. I pray that you enjoy the Bible word as you share God to us.
So many are ill with covid 19 and need prayers. Maybe, you can pray for the people and solutions. flylikeaneagle
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Alcreator: I notice that you like to write about God. Then, you state this is not religious. We are in Holy Week with both the Christians and Jewish people. I pray that you enjoy the Bible word as you share God to us.
So many are ill with covid 19 and need prayers. Maybe, you can pray for the people and solutions. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
your free verse God Gives Me Everything is excellent.
What I like about of what you said---
Desires of mine that I express in my prayer to Him remain unfulfilled to me, though I find He gives me everything more or less than I desire or expect..
Gert
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear
your free verse God Gives Me Everything is excellent.
What I like about of what you said---
Desires of mine that I express in my prayer to Him remain unfulfilled to me, though I find He gives me everything more or less than I desire or expect..
Gert
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from RShipp
God is The Giver of all good things.
May you continue to find you need in Him as you continue your walk.
Blessing to you and keep safe.
I enjoyed your pros/poem.
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God is The Giver of all good things.
May you continue to find you need in Him as you continue your walk.
Blessing to you and keep safe.
I enjoyed your pros/poem.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
God Gives Me Everything!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Hello my friend
Nice interfaith poem about getting what we need from God. It may not be what we want at times but it's what we need.
Good job.
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God Gives Me Everything!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Hello my friend
Nice interfaith poem about getting what we need from God. It may not be what we want at times but it's what we need.
Good job.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from Ross E Silke
A beautiful poem to reflect on; I like the idea of God giving us things at certain times of our lives, and as He often withholds things too until a certain time. Very good points and great reminders for us! I enjoyed this.
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A beautiful poem to reflect on; I like the idea of God giving us things at certain times of our lives, and as He often withholds things too until a certain time. Very good points and great reminders for us! I enjoyed this.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I read this three-paragraph prose poem of sorts thinking it definitely has a universal view of God. I like this part: I find He gives me everything more or less than I desire or expect
I think the last half of the last sentence isn't quite finished.
He thinks that would worth for my living
Missing a period after living, and also you must mean:
He thinks that would be worthwhile for my living.
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I read this three-paragraph prose poem of sorts thinking it definitely has a universal view of God. I like this part: I find He gives me everything more or less than I desire or expect
I think the last half of the last sentence isn't quite finished.
He thinks that would worth for my living
Missing a period after living, and also you must mean:
He thinks that would be worthwhile for my living.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2020