Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Well, this was certainly different than what was expected, Tony. You did a good job of tying this to the storyline, but that was the purpose all along, right? Wouldn't that thing be too heavy for Helen to carry from the shed?

Thanks for sharing. Jan

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019

Thanks for reading and for your review, Jan.
These trophy heads mounted on a wooden shield are awkward to carry rather than heavy. I think she?d have been able to manage it.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! Now that was an unexpected response from Helen. To react as if she saw a ghost would be normal but to want it "back" over the fireplace, is a surprise. And how did she know it was there before? Another great chapter, Tony.
One typo:
"Very well, my dear. I that's what you think." (If not 'I')

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 Comment Written 16-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019

Once she knew what it was and how it got there she was perhaps reassured. I?ll have to double check, but I think Charles told her where it had come from. She might have felt awkward about it being moved on her account.