The French Letter
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Comment from djsaxon
This deserves another sixpack but I am compelled to hold one or two in reserve. Accept the virtual. I am enamoured of every aspect of the write. Great page turner at the end of the chapter. As always, you leave the reader hungry for more. Cheers - DJ
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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This deserves another sixpack but I am compelled to hold one or two in reserve. Accept the virtual. I am enamoured of every aspect of the write. Great page turner at the end of the chapter. As always, you leave the reader hungry for more. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Many thanks again. I appreciate your continued support and encouragement.
Comment from LIJ Red
One icy morning en route to work, a smashed roadkill puppy gave up its ghost like the markhor and sent chills up my spine. The mist leapt from the warm flesh like a frolicking puppy...excellent chapter and tale within a tale.
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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One icy morning en route to work, a smashed roadkill puppy gave up its ghost like the markhor and sent chills up my spine. The mist leapt from the warm flesh like a frolicking puppy...excellent chapter and tale within a tale.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I've seen a couple of people die and experienced that eerie sensation of the departure of the life essence, soul, or whatever you'd like to call it.
The roadkill puppy would have left an indelible impression.
Comment from royowen
I like the way you've with the mystical story of his father paying a very high price for his hollow hunting victory of taking the head off a majestic makhor, but suffering the loss of mental and digital enhancements. Whose loss was greater? There has to be a moral. A great stand alone episode Tony, a fascinating and memorable. Then appears a distraught Helen...well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I like the way you've with the mystical story of his father paying a very high price for his hollow hunting victory of taking the head off a majestic makhor, but suffering the loss of mental and digital enhancements. Whose loss was greater? There has to be a moral. A great stand alone episode Tony, a fascinating and memorable. Then appears a distraught Helen...well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Roy. I appreciate your comments on this, the second half of a two-part post. It does stand alone rather better than the first half.
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Well done Tony