The French Letter
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Comment from Heather Knight
Even though I'm a bit lost because I haven't read the other chapters, I love the way you write, especially your sense of humour.
Great post.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Even though I'm a bit lost because I haven't read the other chapters, I love the way you write, especially your sense of humour.
Great post.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Very many thanks for your encouragement, Maria, and your kind comments. All the best, Tony
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love the description of Madame Bisset's hair - more straw than berry - paints a picture. Helen knows how to play Charles, but is it an act or for real. I guess we'll have to wait to find out. Going really well with this story Tony,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Love the description of Madame Bisset's hair - more straw than berry - paints a picture. Helen knows how to play Charles, but is it an act or for real. I guess we'll have to wait to find out. Going really well with this story Tony,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Very many thanks for your continued encouragement, Valda. Much appreciated. All the best, Tony
Comment from Tootsie55
Another great chapter again mate. Always a good read. See what happens with Charles and Helen now he is more "in the know" about her preferences and under the lap stuff.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Another great chapter again mate. Always a good read. See what happens with Charles and Helen now he is more "in the know" about her preferences and under the lap stuff.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Very many thanks for your continued encouragement, and for the sixth star. Much appreciated, as always.
Helen seems to be sexually ambivalent - assuming that what Kayla said about her is true. All the best, Tony
Comment from WryWriter
Ah, so Kayla informed dear sister, Helen, of Charles's visit. The question, to what end? Got to turn the page! Curiosity is a cruel vice. LOL! This was a delightful reading experience, as always!
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Ah, so Kayla informed dear sister, Helen, of Charles's visit. The question, to what end? Got to turn the page! Curiosity is a cruel vice. LOL! This was a delightful reading experience, as always!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Very many thanks for your continued encouragement, WryWriter, and for the sixth star. Most affirming! It seems as if Charles is heading for trouble with these two sisters! All the best, Tony
Comment from Sankey
Sassing and sensuous hehe. Well done. A great chapter once again. I am interested to see how this progresses with all his new knowledge of Helen etc. See if you can access the Introduction and new Tabled index to Tootsie55's Our Trip book.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Sassing and sensuous hehe. Well done. A great chapter once again. I am interested to see how this progresses with all his new knowledge of Helen etc. See if you can access the Introduction and new Tabled index to Tootsie55's Our Trip book.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Very many thanks, Geoffrey. I appreciate your encouraging comments and the sixth star.
I had a look at Louise's index. Very professional.
All the best, Tony
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Yeah I managed to tidy up the tables I think. (On the old Fanstory format)
Comment from JudyE
I've hung off reviewing this for a few hours till I got my six stars back, one of which I can now give to you. lol
Only one suggestion:
"Where on earth have you been all this time. - did you mean to put a question mark here.
Cheers. Judy
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I've hung off reviewing this for a few hours till I got my six stars back, one of which I can now give to you. lol
Only one suggestion:
"Where on earth have you been all this time. - did you mean to put a question mark here.
Cheers. Judy
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Yes, I certainly did mean to put a question mark there - and have now done so. Thanks for spotting it. Congratulations, too, on your Reviewer of the Month award. Well deserved! Thanks very much for the sixth star. Very kind. Best wishes, Tony.
Comment from beizanten
A well written past chapter summary. The picture suit the story. A good first paragraph. The story is quite interesting and well written. You have done pretty well, keep it up!
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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A well written past chapter summary. The picture suit the story. A good first paragraph. The story is quite interesting and well written. You have done pretty well, keep it up!
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks for your review. Appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Possummagic
I sled your complex story and hope to see more. This fellow seems to be certain to get himself into trouble with one lady or another. Nicely written. PM
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I sled your complex story and hope to see more. This fellow seems to be certain to get himself into trouble with one lady or another. Nicely written. PM
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks for your review. Appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
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You are most welcome.PM
Comment from Cybertron1986
Great description and use of conversational engagement between characters. It convinces the reader that the occurrence of the story is both relatable and true. You have a strong grasp in both grammar and presentation, which makes this read appealing and engaging. Beautiful chapter
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Great description and use of conversational engagement between characters. It convinces the reader that the occurrence of the story is both relatable and true. You have a strong grasp in both grammar and presentation, which makes this read appealing and engaging. Beautiful chapter
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Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks for your review. Appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Hmm! Is there some kind of sister trouble brewing, Tony? You did a good job with this chapter. I like that it is mostly about Charles and Helen. What is he going to share, and how will Helen react? I believe there is some kind of major problem that will show in the near future. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Hmm! Is there some kind of sister trouble brewing, Tony? You did a good job with this chapter. I like that it is mostly about Charles and Helen. What is he going to share, and how will Helen react? I believe there is some kind of major problem that will show in the near future. Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks for your review, Jan. Appreciated. Best wishes, Tony