Fine web
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Feeling of happiness is natural in watching or viewing the web that is now so fine with the dew as morning sun reflects the web a pure art work of wonder; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Feeling of happiness is natural in watching or viewing the web that is now so fine with the dew as morning sun reflects the web a pure art work of wonder; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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thank you very muc.
Comment from Heather Knight
Yes, spiders are crafty and they know how to entice their prey.
In general, even though I admit cobwebs are a work of art, I find them disgusting, but I love the image you paint in the first two lines of your poem.
Thanks so much for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Yes, spiders are crafty and they know how to entice their prey.
In general, even though I admit cobwebs are a work of art, I find them disgusting, but I love the image you paint in the first two lines of your poem.
Thanks so much for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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thank you very much.