St Louis
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24 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great chapter and a good buildup to something coming up. Maybe a romance between Mac and Logan? I didn't see any mistakes. Wonderful writing as usual. Shirley
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Great chapter and a good buildup to something coming up. Maybe a romance between Mac and Logan? I didn't see any mistakes. Wonderful writing as usual. Shirley
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I just started reading this but love the non-conformity of this woman. I did it all when I was married and got no credit for it. I tried to be perfect in every way, but just like my childhood,I was never good enough. Now that I have moved and my famiy doesn't know where, I have a chance to start over and be the real me, not dragged down by past assumptions about how terrible I am. I look forward to reading more of this, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I just started reading this but love the non-conformity of this woman. I did it all when I was married and got no credit for it. I tried to be perfect in every way, but just like my childhood,I was never good enough. Now that I have moved and my famiy doesn't know where, I have a chance to start over and be the real me, not dragged down by past assumptions about how terrible I am. I look forward to reading more of this, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Colin John
Hi , a epic chapter which was easy to read the way you sepetated each sentence really worked for me and the story was excellent . I could not find no snags and thanks for sharing . Kind Regards Colin
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Hi , a epic chapter which was easy to read the way you sepetated each sentence really worked for me and the story was excellent . I could not find no snags and thanks for sharing . Kind Regards Colin
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
MacKenzie is a bowl of surprises, she comes to her flat, Logan turning up, meets Jose, her undercover cop, doing s line on George Whitney, but thinks that he's not the murderkng kind. Logan turns out to be the cook, poor Logan wonders what getting himself into. Well done dear Barbara, blessngs, Roy
Typo : but I'm not sure he's a muder(er)
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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MacKenzie is a bowl of surprises, she comes to her flat, Logan turning up, meets Jose, her undercover cop, doing s line on George Whitney, but thinks that he's not the murderkng kind. Logan turns out to be the cook, poor Logan wonders what getting himself into. Well done dear Barbara, blessngs, Roy
Typo : but I'm not sure he's a muder(er)
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I just fixed that typo. Thank you for the kind support.
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Most welcome
