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Comment from Rmocruz
A deserving win on this worthy well rhymed verse.
This flows well presenting a heartfelt message.
The complementing artwork seals the deal.
Nice work overall, my pleasure to have read.
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A deserving win on this worthy well rhymed verse.
This flows well presenting a heartfelt message.
The complementing artwork seals the deal.
Nice work overall, my pleasure to have read.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from tfawcus
Congratulations on your win with this one. The message is simple and direct. Sharing, caring, loving and loved - what a wonderful combination for a happy and fulfilling life. The are faint echoes of Kipling's famous poem here but without the jingoism.
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Congratulations on your win with this one. The message is simple and direct. Sharing, caring, loving and loved - what a wonderful combination for a happy and fulfilling life. The are faint echoes of Kipling's famous poem here but without the jingoism.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from Boogienights
This is wonderful, congratulations on the win. You have expressed in your words, truths that we should know deep down, but if not, we should learn!!!!
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This is wonderful, congratulations on the win. You have expressed in your words, truths that we should know deep down, but if not, we should learn!!!!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from Tina Crute
This is so very true and very well done. The rhyming is on a beat and makes this an easy read. I like the pink background
for the love theme.
Well done, congratulations!
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This is so very true and very well done. The rhyming is on a beat and makes this an easy read. I like the pink background
for the love theme.
Well done, congratulations!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from SeanFox16
Beautiful. What a charming little poem. For some reason I think of Jesus while reading this as, to me, it captures the very essence of his teachings in the New Testament. As a little band from Liverpool once said, love is all we need. Well done.
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Beautiful. What a charming little poem. For some reason I think of Jesus while reading this as, to me, it captures the very essence of his teachings in the New Testament. As a little band from Liverpool once said, love is all we need. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from Gail Denham
Well written poem - and one that has a meaning for all of us. We should be caring, loving, giving encouragement to others. It's what we're here for I believe. And supporting our family with love and concern.
Good poem
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Well written poem - and one that has a meaning for all of us. We should be caring, loving, giving encouragement to others. It's what we're here for I believe. And supporting our family with love and concern.
Good poem
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from victor 66
Your poem has good rhyme, good rhythm and flows very well while reading. Of course you know this because you won the Rhyme contest. If you don't mind, I'd like to keep it as an example for a later contest. Best wishes.
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Your poem has good rhyme, good rhythm and flows very well while reading. Of course you know this because you won the Rhyme contest. If you don't mind, I'd like to keep it as an example for a later contest. Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from Bichon
I really loved this one. Each line made an impact and the positivity of the poem really shines through.
I especially liked the last two lines, they are very fitting and put a smile on my face.
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I really loved this one. Each line made an impact and the positivity of the poem really shines through.
I especially liked the last two lines, they are very fitting and put a smile on my face.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
Comment from Bicpen
Cool ... this works a treat and though short and brief it delivers a compact message with a strong and elevated voice. It produces a sentiment which is appreciated and requires a simple glance to reveal it is a worthy piece of competition standard.
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Cool ... this works a treat and though short and brief it delivers a compact message with a strong and elevated voice. It produces a sentiment which is appreciated and requires a simple glance to reveal it is a worthy piece of competition standard.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise, well-written poem is powerful and profound in the theme it conveys. Caring, sharing, loving, and being loved=life worth
living and cherishing.
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Your ultra-concise, well-written poem is powerful and profound in the theme it conveys. Caring, sharing, loving, and being loved=life worth
living and cherishing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2019